04-24-2023, 02:03 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: Saint (1-0) vs. Defiant (1-0) - SAINT WINS
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @Saint @Defiant |
04-26-2023, 07:40 PM | #2 |
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In 8, 10 at most
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04-27-2023, 02:24 PM | #3 |
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04-28-2023, 08:48 PM | #5 |
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Posting 8 soon
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04-28-2023, 08:53 PM | #6 |
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ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut Last edited by Defiant; 04-28-2023 at 08:56 PM. |
04-28-2023, 10:41 PM | #7 |
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i stay w/
Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece
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04-29-2023, 05:21 AM | #8 | |
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ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life Nice opener Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years Cool play. Wording could've been a lil better. a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man Lol aight. Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut Nice closer. Overall pretty solid verse. Saint i stay w/ Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house Lol okay cool opener. Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist Nice nameplay. You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection Very creative. Delivery was okay. Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece Good personal. Solid close. __________________ Overall pretty solid battle, tough decision here as I feel both were good and lacked in certain areas. Gonn a be a toss up here, but I gotta re read it and come back and make a final decision. Think Saint might've edged this one but great battle fellas. V- Saint
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04-29-2023, 07:15 AM | #9 |
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ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life nah man Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years hmm I’m not sure I’m feelin it a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man another miss for me Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut I’ll just say it’s decent Vs i stay w/ Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house lol nice Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist this was pretty slick You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection nah Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece decent at best Props to both for showing up, wasn’t sure if that was gonna happen or not but I’m glad it did. Defiant I don’t think this was the strongest showing from you, I’ve seen you drop better material. It’s your first verse in a while though, shake off some rust is all. Saint had two good lines in this battle and easily sealed the win imo. Vote Saint |
04-29-2023, 07:19 AM | #10 |
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Prime cut was pretty cool from Def.
Alil underwhelming on some ideas though. Uplifting and OM piece were the standouts from Saint. Even the things I didn’t quote were put together & delivered alil better Decent lil read V. Saint |
04-29-2023, 08:02 AM | #11 |
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initial instinct had me really wanting to say it's a tie. next. because
defiant even if he's rusty certainly swung hard enough here to challenge saint's usually quality dropz, as this is but fuck a tie - i really enjoy both and it's a different kinda simpleHARD jab-style which I enjoy after reading other ppls more flowery multis really love the {sigh} Simple Smoothness on these punches of both but u know the tie-breaker is just SLIGHTLY MORE DEGREE OF DIFFICULTY ON SAINT'S END RHYMES, i mean both flowed fine I just felt like Saint required like 5-8% more effort to execute the 8 than Defiant's nice attempt here thx for drops; gl next wk; Saint by a bit, likely due to experienced/warmed up interesting that both opened with a Fat-playShame! [he (saint) woulda loved my long technical breakdowns of dy/blu] alas, next~ |
04-29-2023, 08:11 AM | #12 |
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Trim the fat made me lol
Closer a dece idea Vs Saint was pretty consistent here... Deftones was dope, uplifting support system was funny.. american psycho a cool idea and closer hit Saint takes it props to both
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04-30-2023, 12:20 PM | #13 |
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Saint Wins 5-0
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