Pop champagne (Freestyle)

Dope girl · 03-20-2014, 04:15 PM

QueenHoney in town,
what you hurd.
its going down.
A guy see a lady all he do is wanna smash,
don't know how to smash.
what make them think they can smash me.
I'mma hit the concrete,
I bump this beat,
They compliment my feet.
We popping champagne,
can't complain.
number one money maker,
This honey got stacks,
so the fella watch me twerk.

Sick · 03-30-2014, 06:55 AM

Amazing

Vulgar · 03-31-2014, 04:59 PM

Fucking sick.

Just Write · 03-31-2014, 05:00 PM

A guy see a lady all he do is wanna smash,
don't know how to smash.
what make them think they can smash me.

Flames. You tell em girl

Fig · 03-31-2014, 10:58 PM

Quote:

I bump this beat,
They compliment my feet.
We popping champagne

Pretty sick drop

Dope girl · 04-02-2014, 12:16 PM

Ty loves

Dope girl · 04-02-2014, 12:18 PM

Ty guys

Dove Dozer · 04-02-2014, 12:20 PM

Dope. Peep my audio track "not ready"

Exis · 04-03-2014, 06:24 AM

I love how you don't care that your inferior...it's a great quality to have when your in denial ma.

Dope girl · 04-03-2014, 10:42 PM

Ty fellas

e11even · 04-04-2014, 03:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dove Dozer

Dope. Peep my audio track "not ready"

I don't think we ready.

david stern razor burns · 04-04-2014, 03:46 AM

wanna collab?

Dope girl · 04-04-2014, 06:49 PM

Ty for the feedback

Sir Oswald Gonesberg · 04-04-2014, 08:43 PM

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e11even · 04-04-2014, 09:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sir Ozballed Gonadsberg

IF YOU'RE NOT GIVING HER A HOF NOD OR PRAISING THIS MASTERPIECE THEN I SUGGEST U DON'T FREEPOST ANYMORE IN THIS THREAD, FAGG0T FACE

GOOD ISH DG

YOU DOIN YA THANG

What exactly does a faggot face look like? I'm genuinely curious.

And @dg. My bad boo. I love your werk and I wanna give berth to your babies. Mad berth, ma.

You ethered the OM, mama.

Dope girl · 04-05-2014, 05:06 PM

Thanks for everything guys

Certain · 04-05-2014, 05:51 PM

I'm going to take the minority stance here and say that I've seen better from you. Your rhymes usually are more intricate, and you usually are a little more forceful with your punchlines. But this still was good.

Dope girl · 04-06-2014, 09:26 AM

Thanks

03-20-2014, 04:15 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Pop champagne (Freestyle) QueenHoney in town, what you hurd. its going down. A guy see a lady all he do is wanna smash, don't know how to smash. what make them think they can smash me. I'mma hit the concrete, I bump this beat, They compliment my feet. We popping champagne, can't complain. number one money maker, This honey got stacks, so the fella watch me twerk.

03-31-2014, 05:00 PM	#4
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997614	A guy see a lady all he do is wanna smash, don't know how to smash. what make them think they can smash me. Flames. You tell em girl __________________

04-04-2014, 08:43 PM	#14
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04-05-2014, 05:51 PM	#17
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	I'm going to take the minority stance here and say that I've seen better from you. Your rhymes usually are more intricate, and you usually are a little more forceful with your punchlines. But this still was good. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

04-06-2014, 09:26 AM	#18
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Thanks Thanks

03-30-2014, 06:55 AM	#2
Sick t00 0riginal 4 u Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Just Write's mother's house Posts: 1,042 Battle Record: 7-1 Rep Power: 1837331	Amazing

03-31-2014, 04:59 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Fucking sick.

04-02-2014, 12:16 PM	#6
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Ty loves

04-02-2014, 12:18 PM	#7
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Ty guys

04-02-2014, 12:20 PM	#8
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	Dope. Peep my audio track "not ready"

04-03-2014, 06:24 AM	#9
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I love how you don't care that your inferior...it's a great quality to have when your in denial ma.

04-03-2014, 10:42 PM	#10
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Ty fellas

04-04-2014, 03:46 AM	#12
david stern razor burns with razor spurs Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: At David Blaine's favorite place with David Spade and Macy Gray Posts: 87 Rep Power: 3750187	wanna collab?

04-04-2014, 06:49 PM	#13
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Ty for the feedback

04-05-2014, 05:06 PM	#16
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Thanks for everything guys