murda sho vs. Packed Graves [murda sho Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-01-2014, 05:26 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST
@murda sho @Packed Graves

Packed Graves · 10-01-2014, 09:33 PM

Check, no rebuttal.

Packed Graves · 10-01-2014, 10:15 PM

I'm no racist- but this bars leaving you mind fucked
cuz it wont take a 1-2 for me to drop this Er quicker then the day he signed up

murda sho · 10-02-2014, 01:58 AM

Check... Going 1

murda sho · 10-06-2014, 07:32 PM

His broads be 3's, when gunning for dames that look like stars he's weak
So it's ironic at the bar we see nothing but grenades wherever you rpg

Zip Him Up!

BROKE LESNAR · 10-06-2014, 09:15 PM

I knew this would be a tough battle to judge based on how talented these guys have proven to be. I loved PG's omission of "nigg". Had he of kept it, it would of either been distracting or considered a reach, but by wording it the way he did, he challenged the reader to think ab the entire concept (which he alluded to in the set up). Nice concept and execution. MS constructed his bar very well. The subtle hint with "gunning for dames" as it relates to the closer was a perfect choice of wording. The grenade/rpg wp/np was all supported efficiently by the concept. The concept was just as dope as PG's. I really don't see any difference in creativity and concept. Both had a np. Both bars were structured ideally. If I had to go technical the only thing that I see where one might of had a slight advantage with execution would of been PG.

v-PG

El Muffin · 10-07-2014, 01:54 PM

For the sake of upping this thread

V/ tie

Too close to call.

Sry

Packed Graves · 10-07-2014, 02:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Attack of the Muff

For the sake of upping this thread

V/ tie

Too close to call.

Sry

so does that mean 1-0 or 2-1?

Blanco Bishop · 10-07-2014, 03:07 PM

I feel like flow wise..murda got this.
Tie ins n wp murda got it.

Hmm packed had a good idea but it confused the fuck out of me.
Maybe muff rubbin off on me..no homo..lol

Murda was pretty clear n concise from the get go.

V murda

El Muffin · 10-07-2014, 03:10 PM

Muff rubbin off all on yo face

OH BABY

murda sho · 10-07-2014, 04:43 PM

Muff get yo weird ass out my thread haha

Red Soldier · 10-07-2014, 08:37 PM

Close af, I'm edging towards PGs bar though. Shit was fire IMO

V/Graves

Camp Bell · 10-07-2014, 10:49 PM

wasnt really feeling packed punch. dont think
the race card was played well here, although
it was executed nice and all but i thought murda
shit was doper. the grenade/wherever you rpg
nameplay was all flames.

vote: murda

Defiant · 10-07-2014, 11:04 PM

gotta go with sho, wasnt really feeling pg. vote - murda sho

Certain · 10-07-2014, 11:15 PM

Packed Graves: I didn't like much about this. The concept was stretched, the wording was poor and the setup didn't make much sense.

murda sho: That's not ironic. The concept was OK, but you didn't tie in the video game aspect very well.

Vote: murda sho

Unfukwitable · 10-07-2014, 11:35 PM

both showed up with a nice drop, I feel one was clever and the other was more effective..
v/PG

Kin · 10-08-2014, 06:12 AM

Pg...not really feelin it... the ER drop was kinda weak

Murda...rpg line was creative...diggin it

Vote... murda murda

Packed Graves · 10-08-2014, 06:21 AM

6-4 wrap it up, good battle MS.

Wordz AhGod · 10-08-2014, 07:36 AM

mehh, both were pretty bad this weak.. Im edging this one to murda sho tho, his wording was slightly better tho his rpg execution was terrible imo.

v/murda sho

10-01-2014, 05:26 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	murda sho vs. Packed Graves [murda sho Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST @murda sho @Packed Graves Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-01-2014 at 09:02 PM.

10-01-2014, 09:33 PM	#2
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Check, no rebuttal. __________________ back

10-01-2014, 10:15 PM	#3
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	I'm no racist- but this bars leaving you mind fucked cuz it wont take a 1-2 for me to drop this Er quicker then the day he signed up __________________ back Last edited by Packed Graves; 10-02-2014 at 10:05 AM.

10-02-2014, 01:58 AM	#4
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	Check... Going 1 __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-06-2014, 07:32 PM	#5
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	His broads be 3's, when gunning for dames that look like stars he's weak So it's ironic at the bar we see nothing but grenades wherever you rpg Zip Him Up! __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-06-2014, 09:15 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I knew this would be a tough battle to judge based on how talented these guys have proven to be. I loved PG's omission of "nigg". Had he of kept it, it would of either been distracting or considered a reach, but by wording it the way he did, he challenged the reader to think ab the entire concept (which he alluded to in the set up). Nice concept and execution. MS constructed his bar very well. The subtle hint with "gunning for dames" as it relates to the closer was a perfect choice of wording. The grenade/rpg wp/np was all supported efficiently by the concept. The concept was just as dope as PG's. I really don't see any difference in creativity and concept. Both had a np. Both bars were structured ideally. If I had to go technical the only thing that I see where one might of had a slight advantage with execution would of been PG. v-PG

10-07-2014, 01:54 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	For the sake of upping this thread V/ tie Too close to call. Sry __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-07-2014, 03:07 PM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	I feel like flow wise..murda got this. Tie ins n wp murda got it. Hmm packed had a good idea but it confused the fuck out of me. Maybe muff rubbin off on me..no homo..lol Murda was pretty clear n concise from the get go. V murda

10-07-2014, 03:10 PM	#10
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Muff rubbin off all on yo face OH BABY __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-07-2014, 04:43 PM	#11
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	Muff get yo weird ass out my thread haha __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-07-2014, 08:37 PM	#12
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Close af, I'm edging towards PGs bar though. Shit was fire IMO V/Graves

10-07-2014, 10:49 PM	#13
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	wasnt really feeling packed punch. dont think the race card was played well here, although it was executed nice and all but i thought murda shit was doper. the grenade/wherever you rpg nameplay was all flames. vote: murda __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-07-2014, 11:04 PM	#14
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	gotta go with sho, wasnt really feeling pg. vote - murda sho

10-07-2014, 11:15 PM	#15
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	Packed Graves: I didn't like much about this. The concept was stretched, the wording was poor and the setup didn't make much sense. murda sho: That's not ironic. The concept was OK, but you didn't tie in the video game aspect very well. Vote: murda sho __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-07-2014, 11:35 PM	#16
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	both showed up with a nice drop, I feel one was clever and the other was more effective.. v/PG __________________ WICKeD

10-08-2014, 06:12 AM	#17
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Pg...not really feelin it... the ER drop was kinda weak Murda...rpg line was creative...diggin it Vote... murda murda

10-08-2014, 06:21 AM	#18
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	6-4 wrap it up, good battle MS. __________________ back

10-08-2014, 07:36 AM	#19
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	mehh, both were pretty bad this weak.. Im edging this one to murda sho tho, his wording was slightly better tho his rpg execution was terrible imo. v/murda sho