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Old 02-16-2014, 03:12 AM   #1
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I aint got no need too panic my fans keep commin back like manic plastic manic-kins like family of antic addics more addicts and more onyx that's moronic ironic chronic hypnotic ebonix fuckin it like sonics leavin em high off exotic tv static leavin me ecstatic on a new hobby or no.. a habbit.
Picture Paragraphic panic vivid lyrics Sporadically running critiques like cenex..

Im on point play on the ball court.
Ya thugs hatin while I ball court.
Ya duckin bail, I make police reports.
Half u fagots seem to think you got flame.
Hmpfhehe Guess ya do.
But where the gangsters at?
Fuck a hard life like a bitch I want the hardest.
Mantain heat with the farthest combat the smartest.
wits got the game on loop.
But on the real fuck the fame.
Yall can play the role of boss while I do muscle.
Yall can play the role of g's while I legally hustle.
Sick dogs on ya, big as fo'fo's
Fe Fi Fo call em up like fido.
Aint a kinko, aint a thing bro gota thing for Bitches crossed like bingo.
Sing hoe, BYOB DOWN WITH THE SYSTEM.
Beautiful.
Aesthetic.
Givin streets my anesthetic.
Im a cold Case file wit not a single witness.
I could confess and get away wit no fitness.
Judge be like
Your the shit, keep it real.
Pounds it and sells the steal.
Im Fuckin indiversable Pissed the devil off now it's personal.
Some say my curse irreversable I can never be original.
So I burnt every pinnacle im laughin cause it's critical yet hardly cynical.
Watch the fire catch drift, started miniscule.
See the pheonix hatch started now coaxed.
let's toast and boast jokes cause it's everyone's turn to roast.
That's retribution.
Music constitution.
A continuem of verbal restitution.
ASk if I rap?
I put forth contribution.
Whaaat
Like it or not I snap like a glowstick
Squeel your worst then a pig.
Thats cool I got homies who do it big.
Owe me some favours so Ill call it a gig.
Ya dont know the game cousin, dont care what gang ya in.
See Coppers have dignity that's why they fat like a pig.
And my buddy overseas gotta thing for trackin.
Mob Music, fuck the gangster talkin..

I run a round like a mac.
11 digits got my mouth on a 7.
Unload a clip call it heaven.
Murderin like a mac11 a heathen behind a weapon.
Im always on point, cause I shoot like a joint.
Makin niggas cough on 2 shots or 3.
Vital points got holes, center of gravity.
And im no different I just got pull.
keep down your atmosphere like the north and south pole.
I rock south poles bitches love the south pole.
(This verse was obvious pussy game)

Stick em up, It's stick up.
wonderin y the game got my dick up.
o yeah lemme play it off.
Fuck fame, I dont shoot when I aim id rather fuckup the whole game like rick james on 2 canes of novacaine switchin lanes on main bumpin 5 chambers by WuTang.
"So as u can imagine were being Pretty fucking reckless."
Hehaha
Murderous
call it a hiccup or maybe a pep see I pipe up like a CI on a sigh for the murder of...
Wait, Who just asked why?
Crack em, watch the carbonation spray and fly
Blap em up 4 or 5 with a 45 colt live ready to discharge.
1 in the chamber for my anger.
2 in the backpack for paper.
3 00 for range high stakers in the back next to speakers.
So if u aint guess I dont fuck wit squeakers or speakers im sleeker and hotta then a heat seeka
SO Fuck the fakers they be downtalkin like they the makers.
They never met snatch and takers.
Welcome to the world of ice skaters.
Plastic knives fake rolos and radars.
Darker then darth Vadar got a bat sense sonar.
So far been slobberin like a retard.
The jump is just steep, not far.
Nice curves and euphoria call her a geetar.
So get off ya ass and spit english like a teachar.
Make a song to that shit will it everlast.
Nope, bitches worst then a cast.
I pull like a mast.
Shippin mats and gats through common crafts.
Got mad reputation they call me stats.

Ima boss got mad chips.
Cheddar suit with tulips.
Blonde bitch with huge hips and nice lips.
A sinking ship.
Money flip, got myself an actor.
Talk money with a g while she up in his rafter.
Gota smooth voice, cause she know what she after.
Boost a nice key for asking nicely gettin pricy for a piece of Keira Knightley.
Do it nightly were Hap-Hazardous.
Program a scheme now we Aut-tonomous.
Problem is we honest yet ominous.
Realer then most, a synopsis.
Take more flights then a hip-hopapotamous Flow so anonymous.
Call it bottomless bring words back to life like a prehistoric Rhymenocerous.
Did you just?
Yeah I did.
I do alot in this game see, call it solo.
My name is han and best friend is chewy.
Getting higher the 1h-Huey.
Doper then the boondocks combined with huey.
I get stuey, Shut up and dumb up like a noobie.
Hardly new see im newly, wed the game cause she like it when I wet the aim like a tuley but she dont know my name which is groovy Make her love me like a movie icon like shaggy never scooby i like rubies and blunts, Silicite, groupies and cunts and on occassion Ill smoke some junts.
I dig nascar cause I like fast cars, see me off the track like a trackstar.
My minds blank but its always laughing.
Trackin thoughts I had since I started laughin.
Clappin at idiots call it bravo.
Im charlie cause I like angels.
Fuck an alpha they got muscle but no angles.
I dangle metaphors like tangled topfloors.
Mangled all heretofore, wrangled yall present, underscore.
I aint ahead of the game. Im the head of the game.
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Old 02-16-2014, 08:33 AM   #2
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ur flows off beat and the lyrics sucked.
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Old 02-16-2014, 08:38 AM   #3
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nice lips.
A sinking ship.
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Old 02-16-2014, 03:06 PM   #4
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Old 02-21-2014, 02:32 AM   #5
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man i wrote a whole reply but it got deleted

basically, ur delivery is not good - u dont pause, or use any vocal inflection at all

ur presence is alright, bc u sound confident, but its empty bc u dont do ne thing with it to be impressive w ur delivery

ur flow is consistant, but not on beat at all - its like u laid the lyrics independent of the beat and then just put them ontop of the instrumental

lyrics were nothing special either - and hi feel like u didnt write them to the beat or even acknowledge there was a beat - u just went w a melody in ur head and wrote - which isn't necessarily bad, but if ur going to do that u need to let ur delivery tie it together, which you didnt do at all

quality of the recording was good though, but it sounds like someone is talking in the background which is distracting n confusing

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beat selection was dope af bc tried by 12 is a classic; but u really kinda ruined that for me by not working with it at all

i wish i could say something more positive bro, and i dont mean to b an ass - but work on ur delivery the most, then ur flow bc it gets pretty bland - meaning write to a beat and keep in mind the kicks and snares n sht - also work on ur lyrics bc there was nothing stand-out-ish about ne thing other then some decent scheming.

stay at it though. Hope this helps.
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Old 02-21-2014, 07:31 PM   #6
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To be honest this was weak, you could've done better if you take your time, anyway, work on your delivery.
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