Toil 3-1 vs Suckafreecashier 1-1 (GIMMICK) - TOIL WINS

[Sharp]

NBL Season 9


Due FRIDAY
Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though.


Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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@Toil @SuckaFreeCashier

[SuckaFreeCashier]

check check

toil how many lines you want? 6 topics 12 lines?

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by SuckaFreeCashier

check check

toil how many lines you want? 6 topics 12 lines?

I'll give you guys 6 topics to start and can add two more if you agree.

Sound good?

[SuckaFreeCashier]

yessir

[Toil]

6/12 good for me. Thanks @Sharp

[Sharp]

Database
Snowman
Bill Withers
Niagara Falls
Halle Berry
Toaster


This ok @Toil @SuckaFreeCashier ?

[SuckaFreeCashier]

@Sharp looks good my dude, g'luck toil

[Toil]

Lost the will to write for this after @Bags rinsed gimmick battles in his mag

[Toil]

Extension pls,I'll drop tomorrow morn

[SuckaFreeCashier]

NP bro

[SuckaFreeCashier]

You were hittin before the gimmicks, now your bars have gone soft
Like Niagra Falls - rushing to be current in your flow explains the drop off
Two lines in, feels like a three round body, you so shoddy
The pipe? it doesn't care, it knows (carrot nose) how to make a cold body
Toil the type to say "you gettin grilled on the side - that's a toaster"
We bread different, .380 caliber bullets out the glock - now that's a toaster
It's such a Lovely Day, too bad there Ain't No Sunshine in a hearse in the ground
And now ya bitch Lean on Me whisperin 'Use Me' before the dirts even down
Catch a gunshot or one cross, Toil foiled, the dude isn't stable
Smash a haters face or hack a database - eitherway you're goin through a table
You a Die Another Day? Nah get x'd man, this Storm bringin hell
Cuz what happens to a Toil when struck by bullets? Same thing as everything else (bodied)

[Toil]

seen ya skinny biceps, bet u a bitch who loves slow jams
watch me put three rounds to ya stick arms like I’m building a snowman
ya always flipping old concepts: where’s ya pride gone?
if you stay scraping the barrel..I’ll just push ya over Niagara inside one
ya verse’ll flatter mine n get fucked, can tell already..
..so if my word is Bond..I guess yours must be Halle Berry
ya broke as hell, a meal out would kill ya figures..
Sucka’s not a fan of soul, but he still sees the bill and withers
how ya only 1-1? ya known as a waste’a space
..ya numbers getting queried so often..it could build its own database
Sucka’s words disarm me, not cus I love this poster..
..but I will put my knife in his hand..just so I can shove it in a toaster..

[Plot]

Damn, that's toil on the gimy

[Og smokinstein]

Sfc did a better job using the words given.
Toil was cool,but sfc was too much in this bout.
Sfc first 4 was crack,i knew after reading that,toil would be in trouble.

Vote sfc

[Ghost1]

You were hittin before the gimmicks, now your bars have gone soft
Like Niagra Falls - rushing to be current in your flow explains the drop off

Dope

Two lines in, feels like a three round body, you so shoddy
The pipe? it doesn't care, it knows (carrot nose) how to make a cold body

Bonkers

Toil the type to say "you gettin grilled on the side - that's a toaster"
We bread different, .380 caliber bullets out the glock - now that's a toaster

Bread different was cool....punch left me underwhelmed tho

It's such a Lovely Day, too bad there Ain't No Sunshine in a hearse in the ground
And now ya bitch Lean on Me whisperin 'Use Me' before the dirts even down

Nah

Catch a gunshot or one cross, Toil foiled, the dude isn't stable
Smash a haters face or hack a database - eitherway you're goin through a table

There's a table in the database? Over my head?

You a Die Another Day? Nah get x'd man, this Storm bringin hell
Cuz what happens to a Toil when struck by bullets? Same thing as everything else (bodied)

Lol cool


seen ya skinny biceps, bet u a bitch who loves slow jams
watch me put three rounds to ya stick arms like I’m building a snowman

Dope

ya always flipping old concepts: where’s ya pride gone?
if you stay scraping the barrel..I’ll just push ya over Niagara inside one

Light

ya verse’ll flatter mine n get fucked, can tell already..
..so if my word is Bond..I guess yours must be Halle Berry

Meh

ya broke as hell, a meal out would kill ya figures..
Sucka’s not a fan of soul, but he still sees the bill and withers

Lmfao at the idea of withering upon reviewing the bill...i can't give u this man...lol

how ya only 1-1? ya known as a waste’a space
..ya numbers getting queried so often..it could build its own database

Light

Sucka’s words disarm me, not cus I love this poster..
..but I will put my knife in his hand..just so I can shove it in a toaster.

This is fire





Aight so....I feel like suckafree was more consistent thjs week then he has been since he signed in.....had some dope bangers w clean wording....contrary to this I felt toil was alot stronger last week...felt rushed this week. Or like he said uninspired (good fagit start battling like an adult LOL) but yea I mean toil was off an sfc was on....simple.

V sfc

[MFtastick]

SFC first four left the planet. Off the strength of those I have bro the W.

[SHECK WES]

You were hittin before the gimmicks, now your bars have gone soft
Like Niagra Falls - rushing to be current in your flow explains the drop off
this was good
Two lines in, feels like a three round body, you so shoddy
The pipe? it doesn't care, it knows (carrot nose) how to make a cold body
alright cool
Toil the type to say "you gettin grilled on the side - that's a toaster"
We bread different, .380 caliber bullets out the glock - now that's a toaster
didnt like this one at all tbh
It's such a Lovely Day, too bad there Ain't No Sunshine in a hearse in the ground
And now ya bitch Lean on Me whisperin 'Use Me' before the dirts even down
nah
Catch a gunshot or one cross, Toil foiled, the dude isn't stable
Smash a haters face or hack a database - eitherway you're goin through a table
database part left me stumped..
You a Die Another Day? Nah get x'd man, this Storm bringin hell
Cuz what happens to a Toil when struck by bullets? Same thing as everything else (bodied)
decent

vs


seen ya skinny biceps, bet u a bitch who loves slow jams
watch me put three rounds to ya stick arms like I’m building a snowman
lol nice
ya always flipping old concepts: where’s ya pride gone?
if you stay scraping the barrel..I’ll just push ya over Niagara inside one
push u over niagra? I don't get it /:
ya verse’ll flatter mine n get fucked, can tell already..
..so if my word is Bond..I guess yours must be Halle Berry
lol gay but ok
ya broke as hell, a meal out would kill ya figures..
Sucka’s not a fan of soul, but he still sees the bill and withers
meh
how ya only 1-1? ya known as a waste’a space
..ya numbers getting queried so often..it could build its own database
hmmmm not feelin this
Sucka’s words disarm me, not cus I love this poster..
..but I will put my knife in his hand..just so I can shove it in a toaster..
ok


Hmm idk, sucka started off real good but I only really liked this first too. I felt toil used the concepts better and had better wording and execution. Toil went ham last week but this was only half that. Could go either way but I'm going with toil

Vote Toil

[jilti]

Database- sfc
Snowman- toil
Bill withers- toil
Niagara falls- sfc
Halle berry- toil
Toaster- didnt like either


V/ toil

[CBA]

SFC: Niagara, Carrot Nose, database/table

vs.

Toil: 3 rounds, Bill Withers

I got it 3 to 2 with SFC winning

[Cashius]

Niagra, carrot

Vs.

Snowman, barrel

Quotables were the same but I thought scrape the barrel was dope af and line of the battle so I'm gonna give it to Toil.

Toil.