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07-03-2018, 08:56 PM | #1 |
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WK 9: Exis 1-1 vs. Killing Spree 1-3 - Killing Spree WINS!!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Exis @Killing Spree |
07-03-2018, 09:04 PM | #2 |
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Check... going 12
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07-03-2018, 09:18 PM | #3 |
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Check, I fucks with 12 fam.
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07-04-2018, 05:59 AM | #4 |
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Ayo,
I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin' Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward 'Til you is missin' your teeth Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence. |
07-07-2018, 02:13 AM | #5 |
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Listen Faggit Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out! U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step & Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked |
07-07-2018, 11:53 AM | #6 |
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I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision
Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted Nice rhyme scheme, just not a battle verse type opener to go with so this didn't hit I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin' Didn't get this one cause you jumped off flow on the ending bar Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward 'Til you is missin' your teeth Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach Light, but ok Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit Shorten the bars down bro, cheese lines played, but this was still decent tho Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence. I didn't quite get this one, again shorten the bars up a little bit Overall, you had a decent verse more on the key style side, have to tune it up where its brings more aggression against your opponent. More direct and shorten the bars up a little bit homie. -------------- Listen Faggit Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out! Lol nice opener U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts Lol funny Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step Fiya!!!! & Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play Decent pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked Lmao yoooo, good closer! Nice verse here! Lol I don't think I need to explain much on your verse. I liked it overall. That Fedex line was dope. Props! V-Spree, Props to both tho!
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07-07-2018, 08:48 PM | #7 |
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Exis had allot of bars that seemed like a verse from a TheSaurus album but less good
Just looking at the number of battle ‘tropes’ and technical stuff, Killing Spree got it for sure Spree also had some sweet nameplay V- Spree |
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07-08-2018, 12:18 AM | #9 |
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Exis had his closer, a lot of them were close to hits for me. He's just working on forming his bars into punches... I see improvement. Closer was the best for me... Ur schemes in the first few bars were cool, u just ended them a little weird. Try to think of ur punch, and build backwards.
First 3 from KS were nice, standouts being fedex, and the opener. He got this comfortably imo.. v/ KS |
07-08-2018, 02:59 AM | #10 |
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As far as a written piece Exis has this but since its a battle I gotta give it to KS. His FedEx was the battle standout IMO. Keep at it Ex, I know its a transformation from your normality but you'll get the hang of it
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