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![]() ![]() The Swag & Flow This round is a Swag & Flow battle and will be the 3rd round of the Elements. you know the rules to battling/topicals/snf we shouldnt have to explain them to you lines min-10 line max-16 VERSES ARE DUE Tuesday THE 13thTH goodluck to both participants @cymibcort @Nigma |
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The COAT...
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lol...check faggot, ....spit that poetry son
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The COAT...
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Cort I'll knock you dormant, karate chop your forehead
Palms are pourin, droppin hotter aqua than Bukakke porn on this Goldilocks whose morbid after choppin down some toxic porridge Lock your doors, I've got the caustic swords from God of War, Rockin Cort He got more shots absorbed than the warped out boxed up porn his closets storing Think I'm fallin forward and you droppin more with the top performance? Logically that's not supported and you've got the odds contorted like koala orgies And the quill of authors kill it's targets quickly like the flick of yarn Depicted in the grips of archers slaughtering your empty accomplishments You pretend to be honest, saw your flaws suspended in conscience I dipped in Pandoras Box before invention of condoms, YOU KNOW ME!! So, you're an OG in the streets huh? Nose breathing that cheap junk that won't even get me buzzed?? You're the only dope fiend that I've seen who would OD in a key bump Smoke reefer supreme to throw C over tree tops
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Your'e a fat in the face crabby disgrace addict faggot that stays on bags dick,callin him daddy and thats gay.
So quit braggin you ain't shit maggot, get hit wit a clip make u flip backwards then flick cigs at ya dispatcher I'm the type to be a leader of a new generation ,Let loose Huge innovations Then a nut on your moms wall for her new decoration. stick my dick down her throat til she drool when she taste its. wake up at 6, spew medication, then Murder you on text til u use annotations. Step to cort?i redo legislations, so since its real obvious nig meant to lose ,I approve segregation You one of the few i never chose to be adjacent too, cuz you stay as a lame, and ain't hanging dude, i'll leave you laid out on the pavement while ur shaving pubes in your bathing suit. Then smack the leader of VIS while i'm sippin on gin and juice. So don't begin to snooze or cym is snatchin up ya minerals Last edited by CymbiCort; 08-14-2013 at 02:22 AM. |
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Think I'm fallin forward and you droppin more with the top performance? Logically that's not supported and you've got the odds contorted like koala orgies You pretend to be honest, saw your flaws suspended in conscience I dipped in Pandoras Box before invention of condoms, YOU KNOW ME!! So, you're an OG in the streets huh? Nose breathing that cheap junk that won't even get me buzzed?? You're the only dope fiend that I've seen who would OD in a key bump cym I'm the type to be a leader of a new generation ,Let loose Huge innovations Then a nut on your moms wall for her new decoration. stick my dick down her throat til she drool when she taste its. wake up at 6, spew medication, then Murder you on text til u use annotations. highlighted best part but ya flow was pretty nice throughout... v - nig flow was pretty solid from both... but for swag i think sig had better imagery... cym flow was better all around but nig imagery was way better when it came down to it....
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Cymb....Part of swag and flow is the flow....You were REALLY choppy at parts and had literally no structure yo your rhymes...Some of the swag was good but then again some was lame and kind of 'child ish'...You need to be harsher and stronger with your rhymes..
Nig....Not bad, some really weird lines in there but you kept the flow for the most part and you seemed to have a better grasp on the swag.. V/Nig |
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Nigma had the better verse, though some of ur content made me scratch my head lolz, Cymbi the gay was out of place for the starting couplet, kinda killed the momentum, the key bump line was ok but remember u supposed to be swagging out not dissing him, tighten up the flow and tie up ur concepts better is my tip if u wannit
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Nigma-
Flow was ok not great. I liked most of it content wise. For some reason I liked the Pandora's box line and transition, thought that was cool. Good verse. Cymba- The multis and flow was decent enough but the content just threw me...nothing was very good. Concentrate on lines with imagery or creativity. Nigma got it. |
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Nigma had better content n the more complex scheme imo
Pandora box =lotb V Nigma |
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official hypedaddy.
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v/ nigma.
another easy call. wasn't feeling cymbi's verse in any way & nigma had enough decent content to take it. |
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