D-compose v Rev-8 {ROUND 2}

[trap.]

02-05-2003

d-compose

first to 5
3 votes = ko

yo...rev
I heard that last night rev-ate at a sewage tip
Perhaps thats why hes so full of shit!
Cos Im gonna rev you till you stall and fall flat on the floor
cos like the previous 7 revs your gonna meet your D-death
you used 2 spit till I said swallow your pride
your like a CIRCLE cos you aint got a side! *
I make small incisions 2 your body like acupuncture
Their function: to flow dope rhymes in and punch ya
From the inside, my flows drown you like a high tide.
Your revving but theres no motion, cos sum joker put a clamp-on
You weak, like Dracula drinkin tea made with a tampon!
I aint a gambling man, but youve still got no chance of being BETter than I am!
You anti-gay so you cant even like yourself
Pissed off that your sisters hair straighteners wont help.
Your so desperate you get a hard-on from a how the body works book
Getting turned on by the illustrations dirty looks!

hit me back...and vote!

* his real name adam zirkel (circle)

Rev-8

Round 2... I didnt even agree to...



Aiiight.. check it....
For fucks sake, make sure ya fuckin flow rhymes
And dude, please try to fuckin rhyme both lines
This guy just dropped 16 lines of sheer bullshit
U sweatin bullets but im so-king with a full clip (soaking)

Aiight.... fuck that... time for some teachin...


Takin u to school on battlin... ok....

Yo, my rhymes are hellish, brewing like wine u find in cellors
Motherfucker, this is round two, that means your twice as jealous
Jealous of my rhyming,damn in the last round......
I find him biting, a line past down...
At least five times, by ME who started him into battle rap
ME, who last night was tellin of how to not make his battles wack
ME, of whom u look up to, fuck u... I got enough fools...
Hittin me up on AIM.. like "Yo Rev man, sup dude?...
"U wanna battle"...fuck no! minions, Im killin em with rhymes
U aint got a gift but thank u...for wasting 15 minutes of my time
To write...face it, u cant write cool, your just a gay white dude
Your like... 5.6, Im 6ft... seems u look up to me in real life too
And u know that 'met a force' line? U used my punch, face it...
U took the words outta my mouth, wanted it so bad u cud taste it
Your a wack clown, havnt improved since last round
Back down, 'fore ya heads like America 'fore the 60's, a black-out
Ya look like a fuckin ass now...all ya fuckin rhymes are mine
Like last night on msn, before round 3, ask me to write ya rhymes
Listen, D-compose.. if u wanna be smooth...
Read carefully the followin rules....
1. Be dope
2. If not, try harder...

And 3. If ya try and still where u are....... ya shit at rappin
And if ya think its curtains... ya right... fuckin stick to acting*

*He goes to actin class... blah....

Lesson ends.