i don't really care

Darth Yoda · 06-15-2013, 02:23 AM

I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an.
Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone
Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed.
It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness.
On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when.
The Soviets launch appropriate bombs. The Holy War were in.
Magma blotched molteny wads, my sulfur breath.
Fingertip prick fills rosy drips of blood; it’s loneliness
Breathing in the Geysers steam,
My eyes decipher beaming codes in regions
Drowning a dude SO MUCH in the Fountain of youth..
He’s now a streaming flow of semen
you could even see the forming of his double helix
Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving
Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton.
Still walking with ten holes inside me
Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies
Ten-Fold.
Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre
My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama
Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye
While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet!
It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma.
Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga.
Nourished.
Drink alphabet soup, and pee my name into the snow.
God said Adam & Eve not Atoms & cleave so they don’t recognize your face from your own

Wise Wiggles · 06-15-2013, 03:08 PM

they ain't ready

Greed · 06-15-2013, 05:12 PM

had its moments

Geno · 06-15-2013, 06:10 PM

This was pretty entertaining.
Had a lot of dope lines towards the end. Nice drop dy

Sharp · 06-16-2013, 06:57 PM

funky. interesting stuff, well worded and kind of journey-esque jumping around from things smoothly. enjoyable read

My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama

illy

Vulgar · 06-16-2013, 11:30 PM

He’s now a streaming flow of semen
you could even see the forming of his double helix
Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving
Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton.
Still walking with ten holes inside me
Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies
Ten-Fold.
^nice.

CopyPat · 06-17-2013, 01:30 PM

ha super dope. i love how it just feels like ur enjoying yourself when u do this, it always seems like ur just having fun and playing with different shit, its always fun to read

I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an.
Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone
Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed.
It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness.
On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when.
The Soviets launch appropriate bombs

Oh my...

Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre
My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra
The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama
Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye
While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet!
It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma.
Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga.

OUCH!!!

as soon as you said inside moi i just had a huge huge smile

i really can't see anyone else using that word, that's what makes u dope. just really original and doin ur own thing.

obv the flow is retarded too. keep droppin, lovin em

06-15-2013, 02:23 AM	#1
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182439	i don't really care I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an. Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed. It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness. On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when. The Soviets launch appropriate bombs. The Holy War were in. Magma blotched molteny wads, my sulfur breath. Fingertip prick fills rosy drips of blood; it’s loneliness Breathing in the Geysers steam, My eyes decipher beaming codes in regions Drowning a dude SO MUCH in the Fountain of youth.. He’s now a streaming flow of semen you could even see the forming of his double helix Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton. Still walking with ten holes inside me Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies Ten-Fold. Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet! It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma. Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga. Nourished. Drink alphabet soup, and pee my name into the snow. God said Adam & Eve not Atoms & cleave so they don’t recognize your face from your own

06-15-2013, 03:08 PM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	they ain't ready __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

06-15-2013, 06:10 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This was pretty entertaining. Had a lot of dope lines towards the end. Nice drop dy __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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06-15-2013, 05:12 PM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	had its moments

06-16-2013, 11:30 PM	#6
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	He’s now a streaming flow of semen you could even see the forming of his double helix Or reading binary DNA unravel even before conceiving Tech broker, meth smoking simpleton. Still walking with ten holes inside me Breast stroking in River Styx, to steer clear of the floating bodies Ten-Fold. ^nice.

06-17-2013, 01:30 PM	#7
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	ha super dope. i love how it just feels like ur enjoying yourself when u do this, it always seems like ur just having fun and playing with different shit, its always fun to read I’m the metaphorical bond, of the Torah, Qur’an. Folded like origami, or pawned for a quarter, you’re gone Kobe, LeBron. Obi & Wan Kinobe embalmed. It’s over for all. Darth Yoda has forced his order on darkness. On opiates. I’m…. Hoping to God it’s over when. The Soviets launch appropriate bombs Oh my... Merge with a Terminator. Start terminating this genre My veins circulating thin lava, with curvasive twin chakra The Percocets percolating inside moi…while impersonating Obama Coordinating fixed karma, with Morgan Le’faye While I score and filet your organs with pasta. Gourmet! It’s gorgeous how horny I get while engorging your momma. Mourning is outta the, question. Just get on with the Saga. OUCH!!! as soon as you said inside moi i just had a huge huge smile i really can't see anyone else using that word, that's what makes u dope. just really original and doin ur own thing. obv the flow is retarded too. keep droppin, lovin em