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Old 05-16-2013, 01:44 PM   #1
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Default First S&G-flow verse ever, feedback is highly appreciated.

Never done this swag&flow shit but I signed up for the tourney anyways and got no-showed. Would like some critique on this:

I hack security coms, back pedalin proms and rap battlin' moms,
Fuckin' sisters after it's done on some; ''That's what's happenin' son!''
Aint no lackin' in fun; I make city rats pity gats go backpackin' and run,
Inspire christian cunts to fire vision joints on the tracks like Pac's back rappin' with Pun.
But on the real and no shittin'; I'm the writer that put Dali to writtens,
Fuck the greats; I'm a dawg to these kittens.
No debate; I'm the boss of Bill Clintons,
Set it straight; above God, skill and demons.
Aint hailing from Sweden.. I'm alpha omegas perspective.
Halla balla, I'm norwegian; The viking striking lightning back at its face,
rackin' the grace of Thor, warlords, Valhalla, space, earths core and the fjords in one word..
No ego, I'm simply ~Objective~
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