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Won't be home til late tonight, may need the ext if I don't drop before the deadline.
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I'll bet a pink slip on it, that i'll RIK roll RIK without fake posting a link
cause I'm dishin it to wash this walking dishwasher, and drown his hopes in a sink this hoe showin kinks like a mingling nympho, so rippin'ems all too easy n simple make'em MIA like his GED, dude couldn’t be gifted if he asked mall Kris Kringle ill admit Tims really somethin, his illiteracy is a subject noone here's touchin so when you hear Tim's going to Reed, then it's him spending time with his couzin end of discussion ya a hopeless stan, see it's troubling how he boasts he's the man you catching a break? pfft Tim's nowhere near bubbling except the soap in his hands damn spazz aint up to the task, even Charlie Browns pet ended up murkin that ass fake thugs gassed, Timothy aint buss'tin unless he's headin to work with a pass this is dirt for his trash, dummie thought hed lose money when daylight was droppin hours yah he's always sour, cause STRIKT is only relevant when talking bout his x-modding powers ill shower roundhouses his way, surely he can be ''used to kick'' like his early days serve'em more times than he claimed he'd stray, provin he's useless as the words he says murdered n slayed with multiple personal punches i call it TRIfecta, shit is a wrap but hold the applause, cuz everyone knows, him walkin streets only way TRIK gets the clap |
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I'ma be logging w/ ya girl.. it's a part time job for that cock face
Yea, but MY four-stint trees jus' aren't enough to compare.. when she got raped This shit means nothing to me.. & fuck ur name.. just scram dawg I'd walk backwards if I gave a fuck about a Nomad or 1 text verse I gava dam on Ur putrid & hardly livin'.. stupid, I see intrusions as options, niglet So I'll put the scope on ya mouth & let a 325 do more than loosen da tarter in it This stupid fuck isn't worth it, jus' mumblin' nothingness; worthless Da way u tried to Russell up money lines, u could be Rush Card customer service Ur not a challenge, I'd rather talk about when I fuck hoes instead Ya girl uses her pussy muscles on the tip of my dick, that's a tough rode a head I'm knockin' doors dowwwn like Pimp C when I'm sparkin' the tool A Dora-fly open from u when ppl bust in on u beatin' ya meat to NickJr. cartoons This that Delta 88 text.. where I run over ya fam to test da basics & I'ma take ur mom out w/ the whip like Indiana Jones on romantic excavations I said 12 tho lol |
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I'll bet a pink slip on it, that i'll RIK roll RIK without fake posting a link
cause I'm dishin it to wash this walking dishwasher, and drown his hopes in a sink Cool this hoe showin kinks like a mingling nympho, so rippin'ems all too easy n simple make'em MIA like his GED, dude couldn’t be gifted if he asked mall Kris Kringle Nah ill admit Tims really somethin, his illiteracy is a subject noone here's touchin so when you hear Tim's going to Reed, then it's him spending time with his couzin Cool end of discussion ya a hopeless stan, see it's troubling how he boasts he's the man you catching a break? pfft Tim's nowhere near bubbling except the soap in his hands Not bad damn spazz aint up to the task, even Charlie Browns pet ended up murkin that ass fake thugs gassed, Timothy aint buss'tin unless he's headin to work with a pass I don't get it this is dirt for his trash, dummie thought hed lose money when daylight was droppin hours yah he's always sour, cause STRIKT is only relevant when talking bout his x-modding powers Pretty cool ill shower roundhouses his way, surely he can be ''used to kick'' like his early days serve'em more times than he claimed he'd stray, provin he's useless as the words he says Nah, way too simple murdered n slayed with multiple personal punches i call it TRIfecta, shit is a wrap but hold the applause, cuz everyone knows, him walkin streets only way TRIK gets the clap Decent vs I'ma be logging w/ ya girl.. it's a part time job for that cock face Yea, but MY four-stint trees jus' aren't enough to compare.. when she got raped Lmao....like this This shit means nothing to me.. & fuck ur name.. just scram dawg I'd walk backwards if I gave a fuck about a Nomad or 1 text verse I gava dam on Nah Ur putrid & hardly livin'.. stupid, I see intrusions as options, niglet So I'll put the scope on ya mouth & let a 325 do more than loosen da tarter in it Cool flow, punch wasn't that hard...but not bad This stupid fuck isn't worth it, jus' mumblin' nothingness; worthless Da way u tried to Russell up money lines, u could be Rush Card customer service lol Ur not a challenge, I'd rather talk about when I fuck hoes instead Ya girl uses her pussy muscles on the tip of my dick, that's a tough rode a head Lmao dope I'm knockin' doors dowwwn like Pimp C when I'm sparkin' the tool A Dora-fly open from u when ppl bust in on u beatin' ya meat to NickJr. cartoons Nice and clever This that Delta 88 text.. where I run over ya fam to test da basics & I'ma take ur mom out w/ the whip like Indiana Jones on romantic excavations Not bad This was a cool battle, I wouldn't say Nomad had any huge misses but I don't feel he realyl had any huge hits either. His verse was consistently okay, while Strik did have one miss but the rest of his stuff I felt was on a higher level, more clever and much funnier. Vote - Strikta
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Aight so.. The dishwashing lines was kinda cool, and then alot of really bad played wordplays..
Santa/presents.. done, changing it to Kris Cringle isnt a flip. Bussin/Bustin.. dont work, and applause/the clap is real old. Strik: Forced entries seemed forced to me (lol), rest of the verse tried at least, Dora was a good attempt, The Indiana wasnt good. .... Its like.. played ideas attempting flips against new ideas needing wording. Strik gets it for being fresher |
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Nomad played it safe. He didn't have any true misses, but the only bar I was feeling was the dishwasher line. That's simply compared to the rest of his bars, I've seen more dishwasher lines against Strik than I care to see anymore. Work on delivering your punch. Go read namix's forum. Trust me.
Strik played it a bit safe too, but he was much more consistent. He didn't have any misses, cept for that walk backwards line. All in all, tho, he dropped enough to take this one. Not that Nomad didn't bring anything, but Strik took this one. v/Strik |
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damn spazz aint up to the task, even Charlie Browns pet ended up murkin that ass
fake thugs gassed, Timothy aint buss'tin unless he's headin to work with a pass this is dirt for his trash, dummie thought hed lose money when daylight was droppin hours yah he's always sour, cause STRIKT is only relevant when talking bout his x-modding powers V This stupid fuck isn't worth it, jus' mumblin' nothingness; worthless Da way u tried to Russell up money lines, u could be Rush Card customer service I'm knockin' doors dowwwn like Pimp C when I'm sparkin' the tool A Dora-fly open from u when ppl bust in on u beatin' ya meat to NickJr. cartoons Nomad had a cool flowy style as well as a good grasp on things, looks like he's a little out of practice or just used to an older style. Felt like his lines weren't bad but could've hit harder, either way he'll definitely be someone to watch soon. Strik had a few more lines I was close to quoting, felt like his punches were generally worded more effectively and did more damage. Cool battle. V/ Strikta |
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Stik
"I'ma be logging w/ ya girl.. it's a part time job for that cock face Yea, but MY four-stint trees jus' aren't enough to compare.. when she got rapedUr not a challenge, I'd rather talk about when I fuck hoes instead Ya girl uses her pussy muscles on the tip of my dick, that's a tough rode a headI'm knockin' doors dowwwn like Pimp C when I'm sparkin' the tool A Dora-fly open from u when ppl bust in on u beatin' ya meat to NickJr. cartoons" vs nomad "I'll bet a pink slip on it, that i'll RIK roll RIK without fake posting a link cause I'm dishin it to wash this walking dishwasher, and drown his hopes in a sinkill admit Tims really somethin, his illiteracy is a subject noone here's touchin so when you hear Tim's going to Reed, then it's him spending time with his couzin this is dirt for his trash, dummie thought hed lose money when daylight was droppin hours yah he's always sour, cause STRIKT is only relevant when talking bout his x-modding powers" V/strik better punches although the homie nomad was no slouch good battle guys |
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this is dirt for his trash, dummie thought hed lose money when daylight was droppin hours
yah he's always sour, cause STRIKT is only relevant when talking bout his x-modding powers vs This stupid fuck isn't worth it, jus' mumblin' nothingness; worthless Da way u tried to Russell up money lines, u could be Rush Card customer service Ur not a challenge, I'd rather talk about when I fuck hoes instead Ya girl uses her pussy muscles on the tip of my dick, that's a tough rode a head I'm knockin' doors dowwwn like Pimp C when I'm sparkin' the tool A Dora-fly open from u when ppl bust in on u beatin' ya meat to NickJr. cartoons Damn Strikt came with some sick wordplay......on the other hand Nomad had that ex mod line which i thoguth was pretty cool but outside of that nothing hit that hard. I got Strikt taking this for having the harder hits v/ Strikta |
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