AOWL WK 3: Nigma (1-1) VS. King Keith (1-0) [NIGMA WINS BY NO SHOW.]

King Ra. · 02-25-2013, 11:41 PM

16 lines minimum, 32 lines maximum.

Verses are due THURSDAY at 11:59 PST.

Extensions are due FRIDAY 3/1 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!!

You MUST check in.

You must vote on 3 other battles and post links. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.

TOPIC: Knock on the sky and listen to the sound.

Good luck to both participants. @Nigma @King Keith

Nigma · 02-26-2013, 04:05 PM

knock knock

King Ra. · 02-26-2013, 06:13 PM

Guess who.

King Ra. · 02-28-2013, 07:23 PM

@Nigma I'm definitely taking an extension. Too tired to write tonight. I'll edit my verse here tomorrow night, if accepted.

Nigma · 02-28-2013, 07:38 PM

Yeee that's fine by me

Nigma · 03-01-2013, 05:19 PM

As Above, So Below

It started in darkness
Heart rhythms faster, arms begin to chatter
Wish for thoughts to advance on further, but it is
hard to imagine when your target isn't matter
Mind harnesses unlatching apart into fractions
Chartered to blast from the carcass I'm trapped within
Travel the path of dimentions like fractals condenced
I'm endowed by the methods of Astral projection
Scowering texts till I've mastered the lessons

Now I confess what I found, in this testament

My soul shivered out and ascended
And a force pulled me forth with no remorse
A soaring ghostly aura floating north
I bore a golden cord from my former spine
And while the cord survives my forms alive
A warning stripe to adorn my mortal life
As I rise the darkness warms up bright
Achieve this soaring height and see a door
knock knock
Percieving motion it opens wide, escorts me by
Astral eyes are swarmed by brightness
My arrivals dwarfted beside this formless light

I shared a wordless conversation
With this merge of God and Satan
I observed with flawless patience
And I learnt how chakras sacred
I saw mistakes through my designers thoughts
Saw the flaws in all apocalyptic Mayan faults
Was taught how night evolves despite its costs
How it gives rise to light because the night needs dawn

I saw the iris in the Eye of Ra
Look on to watch me rise and fall
In my time to drop I felt alive and calm
Inspired and enlightened by my higher calling

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 09:25 AM

NIGMA WINS BY NO SHOW.

02-25-2013, 11:41 PM	#1
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	AOWL WK 3: Nigma (1-1) VS. King Keith (1-0) [NIGMA WINS BY NO SHOW.] 16 lines minimum, 32 lines maximum. Verses are due THURSDAY at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due FRIDAY 3/1 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!! You MUST check in. You must vote on 3 other battles and post links. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. TOPIC: Knock on the sky and listen to the sound. Good luck to both participants. @Nigma @King Keith

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02-26-2013, 04:05 PM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	knock knock

02-26-2013, 06:13 PM	#3
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Guess who.

02-28-2013, 07:23 PM	#4
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	@Nigma I'm definitely taking an extension. Too tired to write tonight. I'll edit my verse here tomorrow night, if accepted.

02-28-2013, 07:38 PM	#5
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Yeee that's fine by me

03-01-2013, 05:19 PM	#6
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	As Above, So Below It started in darkness Heart rhythms faster, arms begin to chatter Wish for thoughts to advance on further, but it is hard to imagine when your target isn't matter Mind harnesses unlatching apart into fractions Chartered to blast from the carcass I'm trapped within Travel the path of dimentions like fractals condenced I'm endowed by the methods of Astral projection Scowering texts till I've mastered the lessons Now I confess what I found, in this testament My soul shivered out and ascended And a force pulled me forth with no remorse A soaring ghostly aura floating north I bore a golden cord from my former spine And while the cord survives my forms alive A warning stripe to adorn my mortal life As I rise the darkness warms up bright Achieve this soaring height and see a door knock knock Percieving motion it opens wide, escorts me by Astral eyes are swarmed by brightness My arrivals dwarfted beside this formless light I shared a wordless conversation With this merge of God and Satan I observed with flawless patience And I learnt how chakras sacred I saw mistakes through my designers thoughts Saw the flaws in all apocalyptic Mayan faults Was taught how night evolves despite its costs How it gives rise to light because the night needs dawn I saw the iris in the Eye of Ra Look on to watch me rise and fall In my time to drop I felt alive and calm Inspired and enlightened by my higher calling

03-02-2013, 09:25 AM	#7
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	NIGMA WINS BY NO SHOW.