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Old 03-20-2013, 06:07 PM   #1
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used to be spaced out like hubble, chillin`
learned to leave when I sensed a cuddle building
I don't want your warmth, love or a couple children
guess who..? no rumplestiltskin
Told the man in the mirror "you don't want no trouble, pilgrim"
I'm sooo sick & tired of this like a crowd of yawns
who needs a bed? I found a lawn. lounge at dawn
why do i dap the devil & talk down to god?
how far can i drop a loogy & suck it back when the ground is gone?
cure life w/coors light- drown in this mountain pond
valley of limes. tally the times? no. so count beyond
you better make em count & never count em wrong
fuck your yolo. you never lived & now ya gone
the pain's frowned upon- only scar's admire
I sing for cigarettes- this is tar & choir
carton geysers, marked to spar w/spartan hires
a martyr, rhymer- retarded liar
who's heart's desire smells like carcass fire. Barbie's wired
Scarf of barbed perspire I can pull apart w/plyers
quit wasting my now. you a bark or biter?
Indian-give back the stripper her soul
On the strip. Monstrous. Think the Ripper is full?
Seen a stripper glitter her hole while flicking her bean,
meanmuggin, twittering #poleslut. That critter was cold
Use to go to strip clubs to pick up trash, litter patrol
They'd be sucking my friend off 'fore we could finish a'bowl
Nice to see life has a humor- never learned to joke
All in. I flopped Broadway. You turned the boat
how strong's that branch? wait. hang on
I keep getting cut off by Norman Bate's mom
I shower in comets & cancer, dodging unwanted answers
Trying to wash the bandage, awww, the sadness
Somewhere between calm & panic
Same song & dance, gone bananas
Turn Spawn w/cameras off, tossing monster tantrums
fuck it, I don't want the planet

Changed My Mind.
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Old 03-20-2013, 06:43 PM   #2
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This was straight dope. Whole verse was crack. Props to you sir.

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one response???? Damn shame. this shit is dope my brother. honestly way to many quotables. you had so many wordplays goin on it was retarded. flow not 100% buttery but still much much higher than average. some good complexity going on no doubt, but the star of this show was your content with your haha funny's, lol. Mucho Enjoyable, cya round, post lots!
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Old 01-03-2014, 10:01 AM   #4
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This was kinda weird lol
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