Destroyer vs Jabari Black - Jabari Black wins

[Victor.]

NBL Season 11
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 8/26/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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[Jabari Black]

Check. 14?

[Destroyer]

12 works

[Jabari Black]

I changed my mind. I’m going 20 if I drop first.

[Destroyer]

I don’t give a fuck what you do

[Destroyer]

12


u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges
this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips
& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento

[John Dillinger]

u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
I wasn't around for this personal but I assume his grandfather was/is a racist? if so, decent tie in
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
Candle lighters? this is cool if thats what you were going for
things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des
Kinda a self hype bar here, its cool but not a big hit
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges
Not bad
this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips
Alright
& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento
Cool closer

Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
I like it
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
Liking this too
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/
Nice
Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/
didn't hit too hard
Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/
this was dope but it could have rhymed better
I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...​but thats what got you there in the first place/
Cool

Both had some nice punches, Des had a good drop, just had Jabari coming with a more consitent verse with a couple more hard hitters

v/Jabari

[Jabari Black]

Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/
Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/
Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/
I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...​but thats what got you there in the first place/

[Ryno]

Originally Posted by Destroyer

12


u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/

i've got it close in votes. in comparison i thought jabari had the harder more appealing quotes. v/JB

[BodySnatcher]

u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
treats black was off to me, got ur concept, didn't really like it tho
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
missing the w/p, hit me up and let me know
things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des
harry potter bar popular i see, this st8
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges
hmmm...I don't get the 8 charges finisher...I understand how that correlates in real life but with an actual punch, charges of what?
this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips
this is funny but not hard hitting tho
& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento
had to google, it fits, nice current line.


Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
this is cool, tie-ins nice
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
flamethrower
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/
this is dope, i know older heads prolly say its played but it's nice to me
Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/
facts, i fuck with this even tho its light
Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/
i like this...it's good not great
I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...but thats what got you there in the first place/
dope closer


JB hasn't had a actaully battle in a week or so besides 1-2 and it showed as he came fully prepared. Des had a good verse but it had to come extra hard to get JB this week IMO.

v.JB

[For Battling]

u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather
ok, not a bad flip
every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???
nah lol what
things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des
i though you were gonna take the serius black concept a different route, could have been dope but I’m not feelin how you did it here
his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges
this was nice
this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips
lol fuck u. Funny bar though
& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento
the concept had potential but you did it bad here

2 good
1 ok
3 misses


Vs


Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/
ngl I don’t get this one
Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/
lmao fire
Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/
I’m sure the battleship concept has been used on him before but this was a good creative flip
Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/
this is OK
Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/
fuckin A bro, nice
I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...​but thats what got you there in the first place/
good again


3 good
2 ok
1 miss


Destroyer needs to spice up his delivery and execution a bit, because the concepts and the bars themselves aren’t bad at all, but they often come off as statements or simply boring - there’s like no aggression in them really. I think if Des can maybe experiment a little it’ll definitely help a lot. Jabari came nice here, only 1 clear miss and that was his opener, I do not get that shit man lol idk if it’s because I’m white or what but yeah. A lot of good concepts in your verse and I love how you execute your stuff, makes it exciting af to read. Good battle here but I have Jabari taking this quite comfortably.


Vote Jabari Black

[DynamiCz]

u bout to get whipped, boy....put u down quick cuz I stand taller...
when they see how i treats black, they gonna call me cashius’ grandfather

This was ok opener here

every line should be retired. calls himself a gunbar artist? Liar.
how u drop all those ‘can delighters’ and still not one bar is fire???

Niceee

things bout to get Harry. gonna wish u saw the NBL and swiped left
can’t be sirius black. Jabari may “mean dog” but that phrase only describes des

This was decent, the impact on the punch is kinda light

his crib wired in every way... bout to have wall to wall flame carpet...
u could make this Manafort he still getting hit with at least eight charges

I like this

this is the end of urself, kid. des isn’t one to be dealt with
u didn’t just bite off more than u could chew... ur fucking leaving with zelph lips

This was decent imo, but the zelph lip punches getting kinda old

& maybe you’ll get low when u see me pull up in the rental...
...but u still getting fucked with 17 shots like u was Asia Argento

This was coo here, wording made the execution hit

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Get pressed for real. I got a rifle that’ll hit you and ya crew, bastard/
I’m dressed to kill! The Blaser kicks and Levi’s rolled like a youth pastor/

This was a coo opener here

Y’all think this prick tough? Soon as I lift up, this bitch fucked/
Clips bust! Nigga, I’m banging the machine like the chips stuck/

Fiyaaa

Act hard online but soft forreal - so think Battleship when I confront this lame/
Cus u hide behind a board, but a 2 piece remove Destroyer from the game/

Destroyer concepts might be played, but the way it was worded made it hit for me

Don’t give a fuck if you like gun bars. I rap bout shit you ain’t been through/
So many gun shots growing up...bitch I got tired of hearing sticks too/

This is decent at best.....talking tho

Child on the way but heard you loss one. Ks out...if this man step, I’ll pop one/
The stick in ya mouth will help ya child meet his dad like ancestry dot com/

Fiyaaa

I’ll do you in the worse way! You’ll be on life support when I burst Ks/
Ironic how the ‘machine’ keeping u alive...​but thats what got you there in the first place/

Ok closer here


Good read from both ends, I got JB with the overall verse with harder punches and less misses. Des verse was a nice read, had a couple jabs in there that hit as well, but overall his verse wasn't enough to get him the win. Props to both


V-JB