Week 7: DMS (3-0) vs. Barcotic (3-2) - BARCOTIC WINS

For Battling · 07-30-2018, 06:59 AM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@DMS @Barcotic

DMS · 07-30-2018, 01:51 PM

Will winner of this get contender?

Barcotic · 07-30-2018, 05:46 PM

so me
ready when u are

Barcotic · 07-31-2018, 05:04 PM

clowns fold when i spray the loud chrome in their face
this aint a pig farm, last thing u'll see is a round nose on the trey

DMS · 08-01-2018, 02:15 AM

Dude can’t keep his temper straight, crying after a loss like a mourning widow
They haunt him like a ‘ghost’ but he can’t leave, cus the sight of Bags makes him wanna jump out the top flooring’s window

Blue Bayou · 08-01-2018, 10:50 AM

Barc - Cool attack bar, wording was strong... another animal / gun bar is a bit redundant imo but this was one was fresh

DMS - veryyyy long winded, which can be fine if the wording carries it and it needs to be but I don't feel this was the case here... anyways, the ghost / haunt thing was a bit easy imo , personal off his previus battle was cool enough

Vote - Bar ... much better delivery and I liked his attack line concept better then DMS's straightforward personal .. props to both

Cred · 08-01-2018, 11:39 AM

DMS just overdid it a bit with his punch. Almost thought he was going somewhere with it but fell flat.

Barc, far from the best gun bars but enough to take the dub here.

Vote / Barcotic

bleak · 08-01-2018, 12:38 PM

DMS has some long lines, I hope he can find a niche within those lines that can make the style viable. If ur gonna have long lines you gotta have a lot of content. Longbar is supposed to Flow better because you have more room to add multis or new rhyme schemes. Good luck friend

Barcotic

For Battling · 08-01-2018, 02:38 PM

Barcotic had a pretty cool punch, I liked it and fucked with the way the bar was done. DMS you had the right idea for sure but you made your Punch way too stretched and it hurt it.

Vote Barcotic

MMLP · 08-02-2018, 09:40 AM

DMS way too long in the punching line, awkward read! Funny concept though, props

Barc - simple and effective with his diss,

v/Barc

Jabari Black · 08-03-2018, 07:39 PM

Bar solid punch. It flowed well and I really like the concept. Most be punch was nice but I think the phrase “last thing u'll see is a round nose on the trey” is worded poorly. With that wording, i can’t tell if your referring to a bullet or the barrel...either one technically wouldn’t make sense....bullet would make the most sense though so that’s what I assumed. Might seem nitpicky but that’s my honest feed. The punch was pretty cool though - the concept carried it.

DMS your definitely on the right track. You were setting up the punch well. I think the concept had a lot of potential, but it fell flat at the end. You had the subtle bags/ghost flip but there want really a punch. Also, with it being so long - it felt like it was a long buildup to a missed punch. You’re definitely finding your style and I think you’ll be a problem if you keep adapting and improving.

However, I think Bar takes this comfortably.

Good work fellas.

For Battling · 08-04-2018, 11:05 AM

7-0 Barcotic

Needs more votes.

Viper · 08-04-2018, 11:12 AM

dms went overboard trying to do too much and it flopped, barcotic Punch was lightwork but it was certainly better than dms

V/barcotic

Destroyer · 08-04-2018, 03:33 PM

Got barc here too but you’re lucky the other dude flubbed that so badly because honestly, the pig farm bar needed work
As it was though, dude totally missed on execution and therefore completely missed the target

V/barc

Kill Spree · 08-04-2018, 07:00 PM

V/barc. Cleaner wording and more of a direct hit...

DMS dumb it down a bit bro. I see you got concepts but just be more direct and wittier

Ryno · 08-04-2018, 07:41 PM

Barcs bar was a tad predicatble but DMS was poorly executed.

v-Barcotic

Witty · 08-04-2018, 07:59 PM

Yeah Barc got it even though his shit was just ok....DMS has some talent there, just needs to work on it. Read up on how to form a punch, how to word your shit and I think you'll be quite good.

Vote - Barc

For Battling · 08-04-2018, 08:11 PM

Barcotic Wins 11-0

07-30-2018, 06:59 AM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Week 7: DMS (3-0) vs. Barcotic (3-2) - BARCOTIC WINS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY VOTING ENDS SUNDAY NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT @DMS @Barcotic

07-30-2018, 05:46 PM	#3
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061969	so me ready when u are __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

07-31-2018, 05:04 PM	#4
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061969	clowns fold when i spray the loud chrome in their face this aint a pig farm, last thing u'll see is a round nose on the trey __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

08-04-2018, 11:05 AM	#12
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	7-0 Barcotic Needs more votes. Last edited by For Battling; 08-04-2018 at 11:47 AM.

08-04-2018, 07:59 PM	#17
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Yeah Barc got it even though his shit was just ok....DMS has some talent there, just needs to work on it. Read up on how to form a punch, how to word your shit and I think you'll be quite good. Vote - Barc __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

07-30-2018, 01:51 PM	#2
DMS DMS—Diddled My Stick Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 1,104 Rep Power: 0	Will winner of this get contender?

08-01-2018, 02:15 AM	#5
DMS DMS—Diddled My Stick Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 1,104 Rep Power: 0	Dude can’t keep his temper straight, crying after a loss like a mourning widow They haunt him like a ‘ghost’ but he can’t leave, cus the sight of Bags makes him wanna jump out the top flooring’s window

08-01-2018, 10:50 AM	#6
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	Barc - Cool attack bar, wording was strong... another animal / gun bar is a bit redundant imo but this was one was fresh DMS - veryyyy long winded, which can be fine if the wording carries it and it needs to be but I don't feel this was the case here... anyways, the ghost / haunt thing was a bit easy imo , personal off his previus battle was cool enough Vote - Bar ... much better delivery and I liked his attack line concept better then DMS's straightforward personal .. props to both

08-01-2018, 11:39 AM	#7
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	DMS just overdid it a bit with his punch. Almost thought he was going somewhere with it but fell flat. Barc, far from the best gun bars but enough to take the dub here. Vote / Barcotic

08-01-2018, 02:38 PM	#9
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Barcotic had a pretty cool punch, I liked it and fucked with the way the bar was done. DMS you had the right idea for sure but you made your Punch way too stretched and it hurt it. Vote Barcotic

08-02-2018, 09:40 AM	#10
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	DMS way too long in the punching line, awkward read! Funny concept though, props Barc - simple and effective with his diss, v/Barc

08-03-2018, 07:39 PM	#11
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Bar solid punch. It flowed well and I really like the concept. Most be punch was nice but I think the phrase “last thing u'll see is a round nose on the trey” is worded poorly. With that wording, i can’t tell if your referring to a bullet or the barrel...either one technically wouldn’t make sense....bullet would make the most sense though so that’s what I assumed. Might seem nitpicky but that’s my honest feed. The punch was pretty cool though - the concept carried it. DMS your definitely on the right track. You were setting up the punch well. I think the concept had a lot of potential, but it fell flat at the end. You had the subtle bags/ghost flip but there want really a punch. Also, with it being so long - it felt like it was a long buildup to a missed punch. You’re definitely finding your style and I think you’ll be a problem if you keep adapting and improving. However, I think Bar takes this comfortably. Good work fellas.

08-04-2018, 11:12 AM	#13
Viper Member Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 74 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 271439	dms went overboard trying to do too much and it flopped, barcotic Punch was lightwork but it was certainly better than dms V/barcotic

08-04-2018, 07:00 PM	#15
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	V/barc. Cleaner wording and more of a direct hit... DMS dumb it down a bit bro. I see you got concepts but just be more direct and wittier

08-04-2018, 07:41 PM	#16
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601594	Barcs bar was a tad predicatble but DMS was poorly executed. v-Barcotic

08-04-2018, 08:11 PM	#18
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Barcotic Wins 11-0

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