WK 5: Contenders: BodySnatcher 3-1 vs. Jabari Black 2-2 - Jabari Black WINS!!

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@BodySnatcher @Jabari Black

[BodySnatcher]

what up JB? How many you wanna do? 16 is coolio.

[Jabari Black]

Check. 16?

[Jabari Black]

Lemme get that extendo

[BodySnatcher]

You know the deal JB





You a contender but...
How can you write the ship when the musket leaves ya back seared
& as ya bones Kraken, I’ma leave another round Captain Blackbeard
Don’t act weird when I drop ya net worth, this is assault & battery rap
I’m strap 4 cash aimin at that money on ya head till I get ya salary cap
After I beat you I thought you were dead but you've been fightin nerds
My counter-strikes put ya face in the wall like the poster for Frighteners
Here’s a free hint ya defense is descent like boots made of cement
So this Dub is more of a hand-out than charity for a Warrior’s event
Boy I been sick plus my skin thick so ya punches feel like a pinprick
While mines drop a nigga faster than a white girl rappin with Kendrick
Your livin on borrowed time...in ya hood I’m known as the block taker
Boy I’ll connect so many hands to face...I could’ve been a clockmaker
He crept up with a knife but I got snipers & when my far man saw him
JB pulled the Razorback but we were dumpin as soon as Arkansas him
The kick-back on his baby gat got him makin sure his feet secure first
We’ll c-sections of ya body when I pull out the 4 lb. like a premature birth

[Jabari Black]

Jabari Black vs the Hardest Nigga at Pizza Hut...

Shotty w/ a lot of force. Ya dome bouncing off the walls when i buck the pump/
The head shot got his face on the wall like employee of the month/
I’ll lift the 40 up n dump. Either that or I whip out nines/
Murda scene! When I ‘draw, Body on the pavement’ like a chalk outline /
You go to work n put a rounds in the oven. We don’t believe this jerk’s liftin/
I’ll find ya pregnant bitch n put a round in her oven...we put in work different/
Retired burner from my Cuban plug...it stay in the car with me/
I call it Amen cus it don’t put in work no more, but still here for all the beef/
The shit I tote: awesome. Bulldog out the coat barking/
Fo-fo make ya soul float. Ya ‘Ghost leave ya’...Joe Boston/
Throw him where the sharks swim. They gotta fish for u after the snub nose blow/
After my goons come and dump ‘U, BS in the Sea’ like the Cubs logo/
I’ll be at ya crib if you fuck with me. Drag a blade from your ear to cheek/
Meet the pizza man at the door n give him a buck 50...that’s a tip for delivery/
Catch ya crew at a red light. Dome shot! His blood paint the whip when I off this guy/
Ya brain in ya homie lap. A headshot’ll ‘Leave Grey Matter’ on ya friend like Walter White/

[DynamiCz]

How can you write the ship when the musket leaves ya back seared
& as ya bones Kraken, I’ma leave another round Captain Blackbeard

Coo opener

Don’t act weird when I drop ya net worth, this is assault & battery rap
I’m strap 4 cash aimin at that money on ya head till I get ya salary cap

This could have been worded better but I like this

After I beat you I thought you were dead but you've been fightin nerds
My counter-strikes put ya face in the wall like the poster for Frighteners


Ehh, ok here

Here’s a free hint ya defense is descent like boots made of cement
So this Dub is more of a hand-out than charity for a Warrior’s event

This aight

Boy I been sick plus my skin thick so ya punches feel like a pinprick
While mines drop a nigga faster than a white girl rappin with Kendrick

Lightwork here!

Your livin on borrowed time...in ya hood I’m known as the block taker
Boy I’ll connect so many hands to face...I could’ve been a clockmaker

Wording, but this was coo here

He crept up with a knife but I got snipers & when my far man saw him
JB pulled the Razorback but we were dumpin as soon as Arkansas him

This was ok

The kick-back on his baby gat got him makin sure his feet secure first
We’ll c-sections of ya body when I pull out the 4 lb. like a premature birth

Nice closer

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Shotty w/ a lot of force. Ya dome bouncing off the walls when i buck the pump/
The head shot got his face on the wall like employee of the month/

This was nice opener! Lol I like this

I’ll lift the 40 up n dump. Either that or I whip out nines/
Murda scene! When I ‘draw, Body on the pavement’ like a chalk outline /

This was decent

You go to work n put a rounds in the oven. We don’t believe this jerk’s liftin/
I’ll find ya pregnant bitch n put a round in her oven...we put in work different/

This was ok

Retired burner from my Cuban plug...it stay in the car with me/
I call it Amen cus it don’t put in work no more, but still here for all the beef/

Ehhh, light light jab!

The shit I tote: awesome. Bulldog out the coat barking/
Fo-fo make ya soul float. Ya ‘Ghost leave ya’...Joe Boston/

Coo

Throw him where the sharks swim. They gotta fish for u after the snub nose blow/
After my goons come and dump ‘U, BS in the Sea’ like the Cubs logo/

Ehhh

I’ll be at ya crib if you fuck with me. Drag a blade from your ear to cheek/
Meet the pizza man at the door n give him a buck 50...that’s a tip for delivery/

Lol I like the concept, this was coo!

Catch ya crew at a red light. Dome shot! His blood paint the whip when I off this guy/
Ya brain in ya homie lap. A headshot’ll ‘Leave Grey Matter’ on ya friend like Walter White/

LOTB here! Shit was dope!


This was cool matchup here, I had Body honestly winning the match until that Walter White line. I give Jabari this match by literally a bar. This battle is debatable tho, hella props to both!

V-Jabari

[Flow]

You a contender but...
How can you write the ship when the musket leaves ya back seared
& as ya bones Kraken, I’ma leave another round Captain Blackbeard

No

Don’t act weird when I drop ya net worth, this is assault & battery rap
I’m strap 4 cash aimin at that money on ya head till I get ya salary cap

Clever. Worded well. No sting though. Ok stuff thougb

After I beat you I thought you were dead but you've been fightin nerds
My counter-strikes put ya face in the wall like the poster for Frighteners

So so

Here’s a free hint ya defense is descent like boots made of cement
So this Dub is more of a hand-out than charity for a Warrior’s event

Meh

Boy I been sick plus my skin thick so ya punches feel like a pinprick
While mines drop a nigga faster than a white girl rappin with Kendrick .

Self hype oveeload

Your livin on borrowed time...in ya hood I’m known as the block taker
Boy I’ll connect so many hands to face...I could’ve been a clockmaker

Its simple. Its light. But worded crisp which made this elevate. Cool

He crept up with a knife but I got snipers & when my far man saw him
JB pulled the Razorback but we were dumpin as soon as Arkansas him

Ok

The kick-back on his baby gat got him makin sure his feet secure first
We’ll c-sections of ya body when I pull out the 4 lb. like a premature birth

Solid endin

Vs

Shotty w/ a lot of force. Ya dome bouncing off the walls when i buck the pump/
The head shot got his face on the wall like employee of the month/

To simple

I’ll lift the 40 up n dump. Either that or I whip out nines/
Murda scene! When I ‘draw, Body on the pavement’ like a chalk outline /

Chalk outline played af

You go to work n put a rounds in the oven. We don’t believe this jerk’s liftin/
I’ll find ya pregnant bitch n put a round in her oven...we put in work different/

Lmao nice an fresh

Retired burner from my Cuban plug...it stay in the car with me/
I call it Amen cus it don’t put in work no more, but still here for all the beef/

Ok nice idea

The shit I tote: awesome. Bulldog out the coat barking/
Fo-fo make ya soul float. Ya ‘Ghost leave ya’...Joe Boston/

Bit played in once sence using bags alter ego as a flip but yet, this was worded well an made it seem fresh an coo. I like this

Throw him where the sharks swim. They gotta fish for u after the snub nose blow/
After my goons come and dump ‘U, BS in the Sea’ like the Cubs logo/

Missin the nasty here

I’ll be at ya crib if you fuck with me. Drag a blade from your ear to cheek/
Meet the pizza man at the door n give him a buck 50...that’s a tip for delivery/

Yeah solid

Catch ya crew at a red light. Dome shot! His blood paint the whip when I off this guy/
Ya brain in ya homie lap. A headshot’ll ‘Leave Grey Matter’ on ya friend like Walter White/

Didnt scream banger here but this is probably enough to take the W




Vote
Black

[bleak]

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

You know the deal JB




Boy I been sick plus my skin thick so ya punches feel like a pinprick
While mines drop a nigga faster than a white girl rappin with Kendrick
Your livin on borrowed time...in ya hood I’m known as the block taker
Boy I’ll connect so many hands to face...I could’ve been a clockmaker
--somewhat predictable but nice
The kick-back on his baby gat got him makin sure his feet secure first
We’ll c-sections of ya body when I pull out the 4 lb. like a premature birth

Arkansas was close but a little too much I had to think about it

Edit: Realized I fed more of JB's verse so...
Idk what frighteners is tbh is it a CS joke?
Blackbeard was good and I didn't mean to erase it lol
Didn't understand the direction you went w/ the warrior charity shit

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Jabari Black vs the Hardest Nigga at Pizza Hut...

Shotty w/ a lot of force. Ya dome bouncing off the walls when i buck the pump/
The head shot got his face on the wall like employee of the month/
You go to work n put a rounds in the oven. We don’t believe this jerk’s liftin/
I’ll find ya pregnant bitch n put a round in her oven...we put in work different/
-- I love writing lines like this but it could have been better w/ a little more tie in, still ok
Throw him where the sharks swim. They gotta fish for u after the snub nose blow/
After my goons come and dump ‘U, BS in the Sea’ like the Cubs logo/
I’ll be at ya crib if you fuck with me. Drag a blade from your ear to cheek/
Meet the pizza man at the door n give him a buck 50...that’s a tip for delivery/
-- these were kinda done to death after finny's raise but I like the flip
Catch ya crew at a red light. Dome shot! His blood paint the whip when I off this guy/
Ya brain in ya homie lap. A headshot’ll ‘Leave Grey Matter’ on ya friend like Walter White/
--felt a bit stretched w/ the rest of your verse being pretty concise but did the job

This was a good battle, it's nice to see solid verses from the Wave since the vets are mostly signed out for tag shit.

I got JB by a decent margin, BS had his own tag shit to attend to and felt like he slept a little here. Not to say his verse was bad, JB came correct tho

[GUDELJ]

You a contender but...
How can you write the ship when the musket leaves ya back seared
& as ya bones Kraken, I’ma leave another round Captain Blackbeard
i get what you were going for but it doesn’t work because cap(t)ain, the T is what ruins it
Don’t act weird when I drop ya net worth, this is assault & battery rap
I’m strap 4 cash aimin at that money on ya head till I get ya salary cap
mmm decent at best here tbh
After I beat you I thought you were dead but you've been fightin nerds
My counter-strikes put ya face in the wall like the poster for Frighteners
alright I like it
Here’s a free hint ya defense is descent like boots made of cement
So this Dub is more of a hand-out than charity for a Warrior’s event
nah
Boy I been sick plus my skin thick so ya punches feel like a pinprick
While mines drop a nigga faster than a white girl rappin with Kendrick
lol dope
Your livin on borrowed time...in ya hood I’m known as the block taker
Boy I’ll connect so many hands to face...I could’ve been a clockmaker
hmm decent
He crept up with a knife but I got snipers & when my far man saw him
JB pulled the Razorback but we were dumpin as soon as Arkansas him
nooo sir, Arkansas is old. Wasn’t feeling this
The kick-back on his baby gat got him makin sure his feet secure first
We’ll c-sections of ya body when I pull out the 4 lb. like a premature birth
ha I fuck w/ this. Good shit

Vs


Shotty w/ a lot of force. Ya dome bouncing off the walls when i buck the pump/
The head shot got his face on the wall like employee of the month/
damn this is nice
I’ll lift the 40 up n dump. Either that or I whip out nines/
Murda scene! When I ‘draw, Body on the pavement’ like a chalk outline /
alright cool
You go to work n put a rounds in the oven. We don’t believe this jerk’s liftin/
I’ll find ya pregnant bitch n put a round in her oven...we put in work different/
good again, love how you executed this
Retired burner from my Cuban plug...it stay in the car with me/
I call it Amen cus it don’t put in work no more, but still here for all the beef/
mmm wasn’t feelin it
The shit I tote: awesome. Bulldog out the coat barking/
Fo-fo make ya soul float. Ya ‘Ghost leave ya’...Joe Boston/
this could have been nice but wasn’t feeling how you did it here
Throw him where the sharks swim. They gotta fish for u after the snub nose blow/
After my goons come and dump ‘U, BS in the Sea’ like the Cubs logo/
i don’t get it tbh
I’ll be at ya crib if you fuck with me. Drag a blade from your ear to cheek/
Meet the pizza man at the door n give him a buck 50...that’s a tip for delivery/
alright cool
Catch ya crew at a red light. Dome shot! His blood paint the whip when I off this guy/
Ya brain in ya homie lap. A headshot’ll ‘Leave Grey Matter’ on ya friend like Walter White/
ok

Body :
3 good
2 Decent


Jabari Parker:
4 good
1 Decent


Really good battle here but Jabari caught body at the right time and got the W. Body probably more concerned with the tag shit and dropped a lil lighter here than usual. Jabari came really nice and is getting nicer each week. Everyone is focused on body and Dyna but JB is the real come up imo. Good battle and props to both.


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