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Could have a better mix but fuck it...
Grand Opening - Beat from Raekwon Canal Street https://soundcloud.com/chenadu/grand-opening We heavy movers leaving u hauled, we movin in, I deck the halls with rapper portraits on the wall, hoverboard when giving tours I'm in the house, movements large sorta like a mobile home or trailer park, STATE of the art's NY. Know it yo spread to Ohio, home where the champs reign wipe CHAMPAGNE off the trophy, leave it in its GOLDEN state pun intended, niggas mug with blunt expressions uninvited, they POP STARS, send bullets "One Direction" my engineer records out the trap house as I write this my nigga's cookin up crack now got starving artists on that DOPE SHIT if 5-o hit they swallowing CRACK VALVES to PASS BOWELS I'm just a black child ..that seen the good n bad took the book bag route mixed knowledge with a bad mouth fed so much garbage, I'm how talking TRASH SOUND SLAY the PAGE like PAPER MASHAY, got PAPER to CHASE like a DOG and the paper boy is ASSED OUT I blacked out in spots where they wanna keep the black out got a grand scheme and the scene is "Dead Presidents" except this much money bags will have em death sentencin' ..money talks and bullshit walks I don't chase bitches. I let em stretch their leotards walking that WALK of SHAME ain't mean to LEAD you on yo with me relationSHIPS SPLIT fuck a Leonardo he had relations the SHIP SPLIT now he SINKING all slow in the deepest water now the nigga sleepy hollow you lose money chasing women never lose women chasing money STARVING to win? Flies on faces. The RACE is UGLY. Last edited by Quarter O; 07-26-2016 at 06:51 PM. |
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lol Im not going to listen to that...
but I will give you feed... I stopped at bullshit walks & lold at mache... otherwise this had some impressive rhyme work. quite enjoyable with some minor alteration would be cool. nice little freestyle that you got worked up here mobile home/know it yo made me shake my head. spread to Ohio, home where the champs reign wipe CHAMPAGNE off the trophy, leave it in its GOLDEN state pun intended, niggas mug with blunt expressions uninvited, they POP STARS, send bullets "One Direction" ^^^ bruh...what? you said champs reign/champagne pun intended/blunt expression/POP STARS/one direction? what....that was a cool little idea back in 2013 or something. I know everyone is a fan of them KOTD shits around here and all that but...chill... try to do something fun, add a little flavor to this & maybe Ill peep again. nice concepts mixed into this piece. dont want to listen to that audio though. maybe Ill give it a chance... nice work MC Shaz
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Lol 2013... Riiiiiiiight. It's a shame you didn't want to peep the audio. For whatever reason I don't know. Looks like a hater move on your part but it's cool. Thanks for the feed.
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