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Old 03-27-2016, 02:14 AM   #1
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As the autumn leaves start to fall, I weep...
its all on me to find this stolen part of me.
Augustine was more than a smallish teen
She was point guard for the Partridge team
She earned straight As to fuel her college dreams
at 15 she got a job serving tables as a waitress
her down to earth attitude made her a favorite
She loved to read because the books took her places...
even had Mr Darcy written on her friendship bracelet
her diary was buried beneath pens & pencils...
paperclips & a stapler designed with gems & symbols...
representing peace..a feeling less than existential
on her desk she had a picture, very sentimental.
Her Grandfather & Mom standing near a billboard
welcoming anyone to the town she feels for...
Because several weeks back her best friend died
down near the river where all the freshman hide..
bonfires & bottles of liquor, Ol Southwestern pride.
mangled in her car with her headrest high...
Her name was Jenny, 5 foot 5 with a promising life
she was a year older by 2 months, lost in a lie.
See, Jenny knew Augustine was top of the list.
With that knowledge, jealousy was often the twist
Augustine had a thing for this jock, Joshua Hicks.
Joshua knew but so did Jenny & so begins our story...

The more I learned about Augustine the less I knew
as the weeks passed by her obsessions grew...
the details of her exploits made less sense but truth...
came to the light when it is left alone...
I saw the last text she sent as I checked her phone...
& thats when I knew what happened on that dark night
I knew what was up ahead....another hard drive


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probably not :)
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Old 03-27-2016, 02:20 AM   #2
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i have a man crush on your style. no homo.
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Old 03-27-2016, 03:58 AM   #4
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Augustine also loved to watch Aqua Teen

& had a awkward thing for Palpatine
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The nature of Jezebel exploring like Keplar on the Scene,
Born with the ruly syndrome caused by a Defender Gene,
she was the most beautiful that the kingdom had Ever Seen,
Getting tickled by serpents was the only time she would let out a Tender Scream,
In games she would hand out presents and warm welcomes to Every Team,
Her eyes were bright Embers that Gleam,
Interested in the Type of guys that were Perpetual and Mean,
her loss to the good side was one she could Never Redeem,
In her mind the universe had Severed her Dream,
Bad luck had engulf her path in other Words Derailed her Train,
For you it might not matter but for her it was like feeling the Worse of Pain,
She proceeded asked for another chance to even the Score and Make it Straight Again,
Not wanting to relive the ordeal judges thought her style was Boring Strange and Lame,
little did they know that they would be her meal turning her Deranged and Insane,
She sent a kiss of firey chains that got hold of their Entire Frames,
Blood began to Visually Evaporate from their Veins,
She then Waves her hands and the audience was Immediately Incinerated in Flames,
Her madusa like tentacles were engraved in their intefior and had Perferated their Brains,
Then came a cloud of darkness and violent tornadoes that divisibly Separated the Plains,
Thats when the twos sides were formed and deception began to Collide,
Thoughts dispersed in all directions and Could never Coincide,
Deep in darkness was where she was Forever Confined,
Queen of Deception and Crime, Inventions of Grime,
Letters are like Vines that spread through the Sector and Climbs
Spreading Infectious Lines that are like Injections of abominable Inception in Minds,
her nature is still a mystery up to this Given Day,
don't ever debate whatever the Supreme will Say,
cause after all she is just one of his Beloved Ladies,
So evil she was denounced and Forgotten by the Ghost of Hades,
Nature states she is the big Mama in the World ran by the Worse of Babies...
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