Houston....you got a problem?

Camp Bell · 02-14-2016, 01:10 AM

Houston, we have a problem. Im going off the noggin after blowing green thats long as rockets. Hardens old team, ok? See, yall not being wit the thunder, got all my shots missed. Popovich, i got my pen and murder the motive, don't interview without hospice tips, you'll need a coach for the spur of the moment. I had to disperse the poison that squirts from my person, so I started this purge on a post-it. A bad cop on his toxic work shift, couldnt stop my purpose if his glock was bursting. I'll take shot insurgents to bobs for burgers. Autonomous jerk with the oddest wording, awkward mormon, who nicki minaj with virgins while listening to her monster verbiage. Oxymoron, I should have the caps locked on all you wordsmiths but yall not deserving. I rather macgyver plots and write a bomb that could stop the earth's spin until god got nervous.

Mr. J · 03-01-2016, 01:49 PM

This was cool, key? either way I thought you had some slick references in your piece
been awhile since I have seen you around these parts, I found some lines good...others were a stretch
Bobs Burgers & Harden were kind of awkwardly done but I get your point regardless haha.
I really enjoy some of the rhymes that you tossed out there, verbiage & wordsmiths
nice work there...keep it up yo

Geno · 03-04-2016, 12:09 PM

cool. wish you didnt do the paragraph shit. its just really annoying to read to me anymore and makes me wanna leave. please refrain from doing this -cause your a dope writer but this will cause me to ignore your posts.

other than format -this was pretty sick

02-14-2016, 01:10 AM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	Houston....you got a problem? Houston, we have a problem. Im going off the noggin after blowing green thats long as rockets. Hardens old team, ok? See, yall not being wit the thunder, got all my shots missed. Popovich, i got my pen and murder the motive, don't interview without hospice tips, you'll need a coach for the spur of the moment. I had to disperse the poison that squirts from my person, so I started this purge on a post-it. A bad cop on his toxic work shift, couldnt stop my purpose if his glock was bursting. I'll take shot insurgents to bobs for burgers. Autonomous jerk with the oddest wording, awkward mormon, who nicki minaj with virgins while listening to her monster verbiage. Oxymoron, I should have the caps locked on all you wordsmiths but yall not deserving. I rather macgyver plots and write a bomb that could stop the earth's spin until god got nervous. __________________ get high. write rhymes.

03-01-2016, 01:49 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was cool, key? either way I thought you had some slick references in your piece been awhile since I have seen you around these parts, I found some lines good...others were a stretch Bobs Burgers & Harden were kind of awkwardly done but I get your point regardless haha. I really enjoy some of the rhymes that you tossed out there, verbiage & wordsmiths nice work there...keep it up yo __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

03-04-2016, 12:09 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	cool. wish you didnt do the paragraph shit. its just really annoying to read to me anymore and makes me wanna leave. please refrain from doing this -cause your a dope writer but this will cause me to ignore your posts. other than format -this was pretty sick __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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