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Old 08-07-2015, 06:51 PM   #1
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Default Contenders Match: Mr. J 3-0 vs. Razah 2-1 [RAZAH WINS VIA NS]

AOWL Season V, Week 2


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Verses are due
Monday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Tuesday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK

There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Friday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

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Unforgiven

Movie Quote:I've killed women and children. I've killed everything that walks or crawls at one time or another. And I'm here to kill you


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Old 08-07-2015, 08:24 PM   #2
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Old 08-07-2015, 08:29 PM   #3
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Old 08-11-2015, 08:46 PM   #4
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The mist clung to the air, I took a step to the gate but I paused
Embracing the calm, looking forward to the pain I will cause
I make my own rules- A man like me wasn't made for the law
But I'm not a man I'm an artist who's rearranging their flaws
I came for applause- I set the stage for the Devil's rage
& leave an autograph that'll always last- That's your flesh engraved
I wrote it beautifully- This is the most fantastic of scenes
A moment of misery is but a second of sorrow that's cinematic to me
Every cry is a symphony- Blood slowly drops & drips to the floor
You scream & you shout, I applaud you for this composition of yours
What could ornament this orchestra, maybe a trumpet played by an angel
If they're calling for you, I'll make sure you get mangled with halos
No regrets with the life that I chose, the decisions I make
Not concerned with the fork in the road as long as the incision is straight
The last stroke of genius- Be proud your body served as a canvass
As I stand over in awe, another masterpiece, perfectly crafted
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Old 08-11-2015, 10:26 PM   #5
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dope shit brah, let me get these pregame jitters out & I got you...
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Old 08-12-2015, 02:47 AM   #6
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ehhhh fuck it, you can have this one...
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