Objective vs. Hush - (Objective wins)

Vulgar · 07-13-2015, 09:04 PM

LGPA Season 1: Week 3

@Objective @Hush

Check ins: Tuesday (Midnight Eastern time)
Poems Due: Friday (Midnight Eastern time)
Votes due: Sunday (Midnight Eastern time)

This week's theme is to write three haikus. Why three, you ask? You're probably thinking, why not just write one and vote for the best? In my opinion, writing one haiku is a little too easy. Writing three will increase your odds of winning the battle, should one not strike a chord, and also to make it a more thorough writing exercise.

Example of what your submission should look like:

'title'
[haiku]

'title'
[haiku]

'title'
[haiku]

Your theme for your haikus shall be: Autumn

Objective · 07-14-2015, 06:28 AM

I'm here. ^^

Hush · 07-14-2015, 09:33 AM

Have no interest in this. Haikus? LOL Man I didn't come here to be put inside a box.

I will TRY to write one.

Hush · 07-14-2015, 09:47 AM

'Haikus'
Syllable jail cell
I only count my money now
Worst poem ever

'Batman'
Vengeance is the Knight
Cape and Cowl cover the pain
Evil beware

'Netcees'
Why do I post here?
Aliases run rampant, troll life
I neg you

Objective · 07-14-2015, 11:35 AM

Start
Fruits of Babylon,
may ye never rot our souls
as the fall close in.

Middle
I have lived my life
through hurdles of fallen leaves.
The naked trees pose.

End
I never stop as
the sun becomes apparent
through recycled dreams.

Woke · 07-15-2015, 12:33 AM

Sorry hush. As I feel your pain especially when I consider I enjoyed the content as you were poking fun, the rules to a haiku are clear and went off track to far. Objective had decent work. I liked the "tree poses" haiku most. I did however greatly appreciate the run on story, you successfully made three haikus into one. Giving each a different state of life and action. Dope concept. I regret voting before writing now. But I'm pressed for free time this week so....

OBJECTIVE

Gina · 07-17-2015, 09:44 AM

I enjoyed hush's most, but I give my vote to objective for sticking to theme and tradition.

Vulgar · 07-17-2015, 01:40 PM

Hush, your first one was cool.. Objective blew you out of the water though.

Middle
I have lived my life
through hurdles of fallen leaves.
The naked trees pose.

End
I never stop as
the sun becomes apparent
through recycled dreams.

^Those were tight. Nicely done.

There won't be any more haiku weeks @Hush, rest assured.

Vote - Objective

UnbornBuddha · 07-17-2015, 11:07 PM

Hush brought that comical side of things.

However, Objective won this fairly easily. My favorite being middle, the other two had a concatenation, in terms of interconnectedness, but I felt the middle was, in a sense, the highlight.

Vote: Objective

ribbit · 07-18-2015, 05:33 AM

Aye again hush didn't follow the regim d whereas obj came more tradutional and took this battle

Vote....objective

Destroyer · 07-19-2015, 09:42 PM

hush was entertaining but didn't quite follow topic
batman was cool

I think end was the best from obj

v/objective

07-13-2015, 09:04 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Objective vs. Hush - (Objective wins) LGPA Season 1: Week 3 @Objective @Hush Check ins: Tuesday (Midnight Eastern time) Poems Due: Friday (Midnight Eastern time) Votes due: Sunday (Midnight Eastern time) This week's theme is to write three haikus. Why three, you ask? You're probably thinking, why not just write one and vote for the best? In my opinion, writing one haiku is a little too easy. Writing three will increase your odds of winning the battle, should one not strike a chord, and also to make it a more thorough writing exercise. Example of what your submission should look like: 'title' [haiku] 'title' [haiku] 'title' [haiku] Your theme for your haikus shall be: Autumn

07-14-2015, 06:28 AM	#2
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	I'm here. ^^ __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

07-14-2015, 09:33 AM	#3
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Have no interest in this. Haikus? LOL Man I didn't come here to be put inside a box. I will TRY to write one. __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-14-2015, 09:47 AM	#4
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	'Haikus' Syllable jail cell I only count my money now Worst poem ever 'Batman' Vengeance is the Knight Cape and Cowl cover the pain Evil beware 'Netcees' Why do I post here? Aliases run rampant, troll life I neg you __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-14-2015, 11:35 AM	#5
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Start Fruits of Babylon, may ye never rot our souls as the fall close in. Middle I have lived my life through hurdles of fallen leaves. The naked trees pose. End I never stop as the sun becomes apparent through recycled dreams. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

07-15-2015, 12:33 AM	#6
Woke Senior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 183 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 553418	Sorry hush. As I feel your pain especially when I consider I enjoyed the content as you were poking fun, the rules to a haiku are clear and went off track to far. Objective had decent work. I liked the "tree poses" haiku most. I did however greatly appreciate the run on story, you successfully made three haikus into one. Giving each a different state of life and action. Dope concept. I regret voting before writing now. But I'm pressed for free time this week so.... OBJECTIVE

07-17-2015, 09:44 AM	#7
Gina Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 129 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	I enjoyed hush's most, but I give my vote to objective for sticking to theme and tradition.

07-17-2015, 01:40 PM	#8
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Hush, your first one was cool.. Objective blew you out of the water though. Middle I have lived my life through hurdles of fallen leaves. The naked trees pose. End I never stop as the sun becomes apparent through recycled dreams. ^Those were tight. Nicely done. There won't be any more haiku weeks @Hush, rest assured. Vote - Objective

07-17-2015, 11:07 PM	#9
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	Hush brought that comical side of things. However, Objective won this fairly easily. My favorite being middle, the other two had a concatenation, in terms of interconnectedness, but I felt the middle was, in a sense, the highlight. Vote: Objective

07-18-2015, 05:33 AM	#10
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	Aye again hush didn't follow the regim d whereas obj came more tradutional and took this battle Vote....objective __________________ Get lost

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