Contender Match: Muff 6-3 vs Junto 5-2 (Junto wins)

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Muff @Junto

[El Muffin]

Mhmm

16
@Junto

Check in

[Junto]

you won't enjoy this

16

[Junto]

Originally Posted by Dre -- Week 12 Chat

Example of a solid text battler, is Karaoke...

Originally Posted by Muff

What makes the nbl great is the different characters/styles
Junto is polar opposite of kara conceptually for instsnce.
But they both nice

and you lucky you deleted that visitor message...
'' Big bro don't be mad at me plz! i <3 u! ''
hahaha


yo...

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second
Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines
I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that
You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did
Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home
I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib
I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck
I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick



...

[El Muffin]

Originally Posted by Junto

MUFF YOU FUCK

u ask the God for a critique... I provide gospel... ask nothin in return for my wisdom
& you go vote against me an hour later? hahaha

What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?
That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face

Originally Posted by Junto Opener vs Tic

You made it here by no luck. Hush set ya up to get punk'd now you queer.
way to go... read below, it's the suggested route to send you the fuck outta here.

now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive
This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time
Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn
U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks
Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard Cosell
This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining

Suck a dick




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[Bust]

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second

Decent personal, the play made it better

Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines

Ok, all relevant here

I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that

Lmfaoo, cool personal but personally I'm wit muff on not eatin the shitter n don't give af how clean it be, lol still good bar

You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did

I liked this

Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home

Meh ooook

I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib

I fuck with this too

I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck

Ha, nice

I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick

Cool closer

Vs

What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?

This was a good personal well written

That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face

I thought this was nice too especially if he an alias

now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive

This was actually another solid personal off his tic bout

This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time

Dope,

Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn

Damn, that was door very creative

U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks

Cool,

Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard

This was funny, overall ok

This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining

Creativ just off a little with the wording at the end for it to work smoothly


Ok, good battle, I enjoyed both verses.. U both had some solid personals, harsh n witty.. Nice balance imitate.. Personally I felt muff was more creative n had better executed bars plus thought that Immelman turn shit was fire lotb imo.. This'll be based off preference but with me I thought muff had the better all around verse in this one.. Again I enjoyed both but I got muff takin it.. Nice stuff gentleman

Muff










...

[Amen.]

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second

I think you could have been harsher w/ this. Concept was cool but execution was mild to me.

Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines

Lol, solid personal.

I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that

Goneeeee - solid personal.

You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did

Hahaha good personal.

Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home

I fucks w/ this.

I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib

I think this had potential, execution was type mild IMO tho.

I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck

Didn't like this much.

I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick

This was nice.

Pretty consistent verse, Junto. Pretty much enjoyed all but the closer, man. Props...

The 5 Punches Quoted, IMO are the ones that landed nicely/effectively.

The 2 Punches in Italics were potentials that barely missed.

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What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?

Had potential to be a solid personal/haymaker. Typically don't like bars that end in a form of a question, takes away a lot of the impact, IMO.

That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face

You long winded mother fucker... This was stretched as fuck, bruh. Concept OK but execution was mild.

now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive

This was nice.

This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time

Didn't like this much and was stretched as fuck, wtf lol?

Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn

Ok

U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks

Eh, wasn't feelin this too much bro... I think you could have been a lil more harsher on the execution here. Fell flat for me.

Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard Cosell

I liked this. But 2 bars in a row structured the same is kind of corny to me, especially when they back to back.

This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining

Amaze/A maze wp is a pretty old wp attempt but the jack in/jackin as well. Liked the shinning reference. I thought that was pretty cool but an old reference as well. Creative, IMO but not so fresh at the same time. I liked it thou.

Pretty decent verse, Muff. My only complaint is; a few of your bars were stretched like fuck, bro. Try and simmer down you long winded insomniac ass father fucker. Also, as you already know my dislikes for similes lol... I think it's corny to have "like", "Like" and "Like" tie ins which can be formed and more effective/creative if actually used as a metaphor, IMO. But do you. Not really feelin your "New style" per say of writing. Not to mention your structure is weird and the format is hard to follow at times. But overall a pretty consistent verse as well.

The 4 Punches Quoted, IMO are the ones that landed nicely/effectively.

The 2 Punches in Italics were potentials that barely missed.

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This battle was close as fuck to judge man. Both of these dudes were consistent for the most part and I typically try and stray away from these types of breakdowns but didn't have a choice after reading the battle 5 times. 3 out of 5 of the times I was leaning towards Junto, due to preference but wanted to ensure I gave proper feedback for something as close as this battle. IMO, style preference, Junto but Muff had his ups and downs as well if you look at the actual B4B breakdown. If Muff would have executed those bars a lil harsher, IMO he could have had this battle. I just think Junto's personals were a lot better and more effective then the personals Muff tried to execute on. So w/ that being said... Really nothing more that can be said other then...

v/Junto

[Hush]

Bump

[Maximus]

Junta had eating the butt, six to ya chest and rolled up in the trunk which were all dope as fuck to me and landed well, he also had a couple personal jabs scattered in his verse. Overall solid verse from junto.
Vs
Muff had the opener which was aight, trapdoor spider was dope, the jurassic park line was cool but damn man it was 28 syllable count, way too stretched to have a solid impact man and that's a general problem in most of ur lines, the howard cossell line was also solid.
.
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So I got it 3 vs 3 on lines I liked best but Junto's were much more worded better and he was more consistent than Muff who was aight but had too many stretched lines which were sometimes hard to follow. Cool battle here fellas.
V/Junto

[ribbit]

Okay I'm going with muff on this one although some of his wording seemed a bit forced I thought his lines were more personal junto had trouble I felt with the structure of his verse and I didn't think his lines were as creative as muff so yeah vote/muff

Well after reading this again I still feel like muff took this battle becuaz junto wasn't hitting as hard and muff seemed to have a more clearcut explanation of his lines I didn't enjoy juntos closer and a couple of his lines were a bit to basice like the sleep number and the lebron line both felt a bit to simple to me so yay vote muff

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Junto

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second
cool concept but you didn't really set up leap second. Nice but could have been dope
Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines
light jab. cool do
I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that
nice flip on this. Like this concept better than mine but don't like the wording
You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did
would have hit if you set up sleep number
Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home
nice liked this
I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib
nah homie
I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck
too straightforward
I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick
this was cool

Originally Posted by Muff

What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?
cool personal
That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face
this aight but a little simple
now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive
nice
This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time
not feeling it
Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn
ehh. I get it. It would be dope if it wasn't so obscure. Or if you set up the punch better
U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks
I'll pass
Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard Cosell
need to set this up with some sort of Ali reference to make this work
This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining
straight I guess

Nice battle fellas. I feel like this is a close one that really just depends on your style preference. I have Junto with the opener, tips from dre, not lebron, and elephant trick. I have Muff with opener, trapdoor spider, and shining. Muff I feel like you rushed this because you had better concepts overall but there were a few bars that didn't get full execution and were near misses.

I think people need to work on better set up for obscure references. Making people have to Google shit to understand is lazy writing.

Anyways... close battle but

Vote: Junto

[Inno]

Cllose battle.

Cronus line, sleep number line and the closer

Vs

Opener, The immelmen turn, trap door spider line, closer.

Good battle i felt like both stay up with each other. Didnt see too many fillers from either. This had alot of personal, made for a interseting read. I gotta say i feel like muff started strong and ended strong while keeping it more consistent in the middle. Thoight his wording was off at times but i felt like he dropped. More consistent verse overall.

That opener was dope.

Muffins

[Destroyer]

cronus, eat butt, sleep number

vs

opener, recognition tech, trapdoor spider, flip craft and end up behind me

muff came hard as fuck in this battle. Jun was ok, but I think he slacked a little from previous weeks and Muff took advantage.

v/muff

[Cred]

Opener, butt instead, big gulp, closer

Vs

Opener, recognition tech, trapdoor

Nice battle got it in a close one. Both came wit bars, i jus felt i was diggin juntos verse more here. It came down to preference & he also had one more quote. Dope match though.

Vote Junto

[Tic]

Opener, Cronus, Dre, Lebron, closer - solid verse Junto, I was feeling it. A couple misses but for the most part it was rap solid.

Vs.

Opener, recognition, Immelmann turn - the punches that hit were nice, but some of your references are really obscure and I had no idea what you were talking about until I looked them up. And even then meh.

I think Junto takes this with consistency.

[IAmRhetoric]

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second
i don't really like self np's, but it wasn't bad

Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines
lmao

I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that
dope

You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did
dude the wording butchered this

Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home
damn

I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib
okay

I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck
okay

I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick
okay


muff

What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?
nice

That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face
lmao

now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive
..meh bruh

This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time
lol ok

Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn
nice

U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks
lotb

Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard Cosell
nice

This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining
i like this


you know you're my nigga muff but i gotta give it to Junto

mvgt/ Junto for having a consistent battle muff had some meh/misses but junto had a pretty secure verse

[Hush]

Junto wins
This was dope
I have much to say

Muff was barring too