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...DA GAWD...
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Lol... u really used a manicure line?
U at the EN of ur wits w/ him in BA and def put u back on a stretcher, They say watch for BB guns? <-- but go figure since like them u fold under pressure
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WP Po'ethics ![]() Last edited by Spoken; 11-15-2014 at 10:19 AM. |
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Sup..
your name's beyond oxymoronic- ur scripts should b ripped n buried only thing we'd wanna read with ur name on it...would b your obituary Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 11-17-2014 at 05:53 PM. |
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@Blanco Bishop due TONIGHT 12AM PST
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...DA GAWD...
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@BROKE LESNAR we open for votes
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storyteller
ur concept was dope af the fold under pressure part specifically the rhyme wss awkward but still a good line blanco. ive seen lines similar to this. not a bad flip this is close but ima go w/ story herw v/ story
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6ft of Seperation
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Fresh
Vs Flipped concept. Vote: Storyteller. |
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Story...fire punch...creative...original...smooth too..good shit
Bb... this isnt as original if u flipped his name in the obituary punch would been a lil harder Vote... that Fella Story Tella |
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v/StoryTeller (even though the flow was kinda weird)I thought Blanco was alil on the bland side
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Story was on his game here. Haven't seen him drop this hard in 3 yrs tbh.
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