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![]() NEWBIE 2013 ROUND 2 No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling Line Limits -10 Minimum -14 Maximum First person to drop can edit only until the 2nd person drops. 2nd person can edit only until the first vote is submitted DUE: Saturday, 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time Extensions are available at request until Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time, exactly 24 hours later. Good Luck @Utmost @Flo Real |
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I'm sick like cancer, raising my game to sharp levels of rhymes
If you ever found growth.... it's just a poor attempt to benign, Your mrs is eye stinging, ugly an minging...she leaves kids in tears. Im not one to beat a dead horse... Especially when you been beating her for years! I smash jaws, cut lips, break bones an am known to crack ribs. If you ever crack someone up.. it's in stitches of laughter at your fag hits Yo I get the girls wet, this faggot be needing some.. let alone practice. An when I said he had a dry run... I wasn't on about rehearsing that shit I see the win I take it, I see bitches and im snatching head from them whores This competition is mine for the taking, while Most can only clutch at some straws |
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talk about non-progressive Flo...this is more like cerebral palsy Whoa. Hope i hit closer to home, open a can of whoop ass n' float u a bowl just want to die Jest...since every serving'll always go to the throat To be honest, that aint the issue twerp, its ur flow, concepts..shit, the verse I mean, thats a Real-list for you...& you should prolly work on THAT first You aint seein next round, just cry now from how much Ive clowned Cos I can beat you standing on my head...sry itza lil hrd 2 tipe upsyde dwn Its over, get ur cap peeled..u'll eat bullets when i clap steel & I'd show everybody the snuff film...but its more of a gag Real should be enuff |
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Flo ur first bar I didn't even get.
I get the wordplay. Benign/be nine. Unless its something less obvious lol. But I don't get te diss there. Beat a dead horse is played and so is cracking up. Execution was ok on both. Last 2 were meh. Utmost first bar was ight. Digest was cool. Realist was executed weird, good concept. Upside down was funny but a throw a way. Last bar was meh. V/ utmost Better verse execution an concepts. |
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Your mrs is eye stinging, ugly an minging...she leaves kids in tears.
Im not one to beat a dead horse... Especially when you been beating her for years vs This had me leanin ALL week!!! been a noob since 08' dawg geez talk about non-progressive Flo...this is more like cerebral palsy Hope i hit closer to home, open a can of whoop ass n' float u a bowl just want to die Jest...since every serving'll always go to the throat You aint seein next round, just cry now from how much Ive clowned Cos I can beat you standing on my head...sry itza lil hrd 2 tipe upsyde dwn utmost |
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I'm sick like cancer, raising my game to sharp levels of rhymes
If you ever found growth.... it's just a poor attempt to benign, ive had benign used on me before but this was cool, coulda been clearer tho Your mrs is eye stinging, ugly an minging...she leaves kids in tears. Im not one to beat a dead horse... Especially when you been beating her for years! ok I smash jaws, cut lips, break bones an am known to crack ribs. If you ever crack someone up.. it's in stitches of laughter at your fag hits really predictable Yo I get the girls wet, this faggot be needing some.. let alone practice. An when I said he had a dry run... I wasn't on about rehearsing that shit alright I see the win I take it, I see bitches and im snatching head from them whores This competition is mine for the taking, while Most can only clutch at some straws not too strong This had me leanin ALL week!!! been a noob since 08' dawg geez talk about non-progressive Flo...this is more like cerebral palsy progressive/flo been done for awhile Whoa. Hope i hit closer to home, open a can of whoop ass n' float u a bowl just want to die Jest...since every serving'll always go to the throat slick To be honest, that aint the issue twerp, its ur flow, concepts..shit, the verse I mean, thats a Real-list for you...& you should prolly work on THAT first cool You aint seein next round, just cry now from how much Ive clowned Cos I can beat you standing on my head...sry itza lil hrd 2 tipe upsyde dwn lol but what tho Its over, get ur cap peeled..u'll eat bullets when i clap steel & I'd show everybody the snuff film...but its more of a gag Real clever flo had some played ideas, while utmosts only hits were nameplays and they got kinda stale by the end. close, but utmost had the stronger hits and better misses v/utmost |
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