"Flutterby, Butterfly" - Brian Bryan vs. MMLP

Brian Bryan · 08-09-2013, 04:36 AM

We both wrote to this random image. His verse to follow. Any votes/feedback on who had the better verse are welcomed. Enjoy or endure!

I broke free from the chrysalis of my sheltered youth
See me, I was different. I needed significance.
Some’s freedom is limited by how far they choose to dream
and for that reason it’s vision that sets apart the ‘you’ and ‘me’.
I’d started to believe that I could go the distance. You
were motioning persistently – I opened my precocious wings and flew
in the hope the winds that blew would deliver me to prosperity
- The unknown a kingdom soon to be considered in ones destiny -
as I shifted my limbs restlessly, got my feet up off the ground,
and I quickened with intensity while leaving my surroundings.
See me, I’d want to scout every commune and oasis
knowing dreams are often found in the most peculiar places
but I knew I could make it if I reached upright and strained.
The pursuit of our favourite things gets easier by the day
to achieve and I’ve obtained mine while you‘ve sat beneath the sky
forget the shadow I leave behind, just remember the fact you’ve seen me fly…

08-09-2013, 04:36 AM	#1
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	"Flutterby, Butterfly" - Brian Bryan vs. MMLP We both wrote to this random image. His verse to follow. Any votes/feedback on who had the better verse are welcomed. Enjoy or endure! I broke free from the chrysalis of my sheltered youth See me, I was different. I needed significance. Some’s freedom is limited by how far they choose to dream and for that reason it’s vision that sets apart the ‘you’ and ‘me’. I’d started to believe that I could go the distance. You were motioning persistently – I opened my precocious wings and flew in the hope the winds that blew would deliver me to prosperity - The unknown a kingdom soon to be considered in ones destiny - as I shifted my limbs restlessly, got my feet up off the ground, and I quickened with intensity while leaving my surroundings. See me, I’d want to scout every commune and oasis knowing dreams are often found in the most peculiar places but I knew I could make it if I reached upright and strained. The pursuit of our favourite things gets easier by the day to achieve and I’ve obtained mine while you‘ve sat beneath the sky forget the shadow I leave behind, just remember the fact you’ve seen me fly… Last edited by Brian Bryan; 08-09-2013 at 05:16 AM.