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wow. i loved this, now...im not going to break your shit down
into what i think you were trying to do or shouldve been trying to do. its simple. this shit was dope, it seemed directed at the people here, who seem to cast down on different styles thats not their own or netcee approved. but, it flowed super nice an i liked the structure, it was somewhat easy to read, if that makes sense. like, i didnt have to "make" a rhyme fit in my head or try to figure out whats supposed to rhyme with what. it was all wet. good shit man, hope you post more or i'd like to collab on some shit.
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