Metaphors - SpeedVerse

Illume · 08-01-2013, 06:43 PM

Been a while since I been flexin or speed writing so here's a speed verse. No edits.

The mirage is displayed, haze like in a memories' light
like water turning to sand, then the thrust. Memories knife.
It must have been past lives that have brought this evil
Does a shark bite, die, rise, and then become this feeble?
The muscle mass is the truffle gas from this duffle bag,
A hustled pass into tougher grass, where the dogs clutch and hack,
But I must detach from these puffled laughs and life and rift,
Cause this mask is heavier than twice the irons I might try to lift.
I ply my gifts for the right to fit, but this life's too tight, it's my mind that's ripped,
The mind defines the world, to the height and extent I wish
That's why the world might be a mile, and two sizes too big
might be the right fit.

Geno · 08-01-2013, 08:44 PM

cool shit, i dig these kind of exercises, had some dope content for being quickly drawn out.

08-01-2013, 06:43 PM	#1
Illume Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 145 Rep Power: 671780	Metaphors - SpeedVerse Been a while since I been flexin or speed writing so here's a speed verse. No edits. The mirage is displayed, haze like in a memories' light like water turning to sand, then the thrust. Memories knife. It must have been past lives that have brought this evil Does a shark bite, die, rise, and then become this feeble? The muscle mass is the truffle gas from this duffle bag, A hustled pass into tougher grass, where the dogs clutch and hack, But I must detach from these puffled laughs and life and rift, Cause this mask is heavier than twice the irons I might try to lift. I ply my gifts for the right to fit, but this life's too tight, it's my mind that's ripped, The mind defines the world, to the height and extent I wish That's why the world might be a mile, and two sizes too big might be the right fit.

08-01-2013, 08:44 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	cool shit, i dig these kind of exercises, had some dope content for being quickly drawn out. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*