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09-26-2014, 03:35 PM
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The Beauty of The Crow
The character of a crow is a harrier to the most
It's scarier for it's terror and very stern in it's prose The evil in it's eyes seem feeble through it's disguise It's equal to an eagle, though lethal throughout it's mind It's soul shadowed by darkness.. cold, shallowed and artless It's heart sparks the harshness where it marks its' target A heartless being seeking a harmless carcass It leaps far aches just to carve n' harvest Poised in position with the choice of it's victim... It's vindictive and depicted with no remorse for inflictions Soaring miles through the clouds, forcing child's into shrouds Morbid, wild and profound is the style of this hound A living mystery... giving misery upon the innocent We've witnessed it's wicked imagery, given it's difference It's lives for bloodlust, you must run when it's choosing who's disposed But it's just the ugly truth about the beauty of the crow... |
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09-26-2014, 04:02 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 666
Battle Record: 3-3
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I will feed this when I see you hittin up other posts in here with comments...otherwise u gonna find out they dont play that here
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09-26-2014, 04:06 PM
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I ain't "playin'" nothing. I'm simply posting my shit. I'll comment when I get around to it. so don't freepost on my pieces if you ain't got feed, that's a waste of my time. I'll feed when I get a chance.
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09-26-2014, 04:21 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 666
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best lines to me
Poised in position with the choice of it's victim... It's vindictive and depicted with no remorse for inflictions overall much better read then ya other drop...this was more wit' it as far as rhyme schemes an content...pretty solid... HoLLa |
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09-26-2014, 04:24 PM
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thanks for the feed. respect
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09-26-2014, 10:38 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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seemed a little loose and choppy in some ends. picked up in a few lines. the cohesion was cool. seemed like a younger version of you wrote some lines and then a more experienced version wrote the other lines. seemed weird reading at times.
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