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Old 09-09-2014, 08:02 PM   #1
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I tried fighting fire with fire, but that only left my pride burnt
I play the role of the ocean & it's time to recede and let tides turn
What I'm holdin is potent, what's mine is for me.
you can't see what hath not eyes earned
I hide smirks, knowing in my head that you deal with death
A swift hand can only come down to sever necks
I'm never vexed, I see all opponents as shift gazes, shits amazin' how I calculate moves of men then demonstrate tools to win
scared of what you don't understand, revel in fear
It took several years to get prepared to play the underhand
A sheep in wolfs clothing, built off self loathing
Peep the showing of my master card, it trumps all
Hear the horns of victory and the trumpet calls
I fuckin' ball. Ties are severed as write this letter
Despise of several, im not outspoken, confined is better
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Old 09-10-2014, 07:47 AM   #2
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scared of what you don't understand, revel in fear
It took several years to get prepared to play the underhand

best bars to me.... whole piece was pretty smooth tho'...diggin how you keep verses short an still get in wha' you need to....cuz' at some point if you haven't already these could be recorded verses.

your doin' ya thing man...your 2 for 2 so far in my book...styles a breath of fresh air!

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