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Old 07-13-2013, 04:40 PM   #1
Dove Dozer
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Death lurks and it looms, urgently moved to the emergency room.
Surgeons hurridly use surgical tools for nursing the burgundy wound..
Cant face this murderous doom, frightened by the red that is gushing..
Rib skeletal structures cracked from the lead in my stomach..
Hot metal's wrecking my functions, bleeding excessively..
Death manifesting next to me desperately trying to get the best of me..
Im getting weak, two hot metal stones in a torn spleen..
One more injection, and ill be overdosing on morphine..
I was only fourteen feelin my head gettin heavy..
saw the gun, saw him pull the trigger, i never was ready..
Two metal pellets settling in me, didnt think he'd be packin heat..
Or that he'd be blasting three after me, because i didnt have the G..
Blackness surpassing me, minutes from being laid to rest..
My brain is vexed playin chess with the angel of death..
Should of brang defense, death is malevolent.
Pledging I'll be checking in on every single one of my relatives..
Everything has a relevance, I yearn for it all..
Its like playing a game of tennis with a murderdous ball..
So learn from me y'all, i feel the scalpel slice to to right,
Im blinded by light, finding im striving to stay alive in this life..
The shine is too bright, cant be hypnotized by his might,
Cant let these fiending demons win, im gonna fight till i die..
The surgeons having trouble locating the metal..
Im facing the devil, cant sink underground..
Gotta stay on this level..
Suddenly I close my eyes to pass time.
Then I wake up... a holy spirit hearing a flatline..
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