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The Landlord
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![]() ![]() The Regular Battle Thisround is a regular battle and will start off the elements tourney you know the rules to battling/topicals/ssnf we shouldnt have to explain them to you lines min-10 line max-16 VERSES ARE DUE THURSDAY THE 25TH goodluck to both participants |
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fuck this.
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just sent a quick 10.
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Thinking your gonna win is ignorance
if you put your pride to the side you'd see your a complete dunce but if we put Pryde to the side, you ain't had a real win in over 3 fuckin months That battle record is horrible your lines long & aint none of em coo them verses you jot are lull, they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U Every punch you throw comes up short, your destined to fall with concepts so stretched they could prevent pulled hamstrings & all This quick verse & round 1 share common ground, not that im proud of it but even though its completely half assed Im still getting the Most out of it The name of this tourny requires perfection so the room for error is thin so how you gonna take it when you aint even master the Element of the win?
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The Landlord
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utmosts verse
. . NCPD put you in timeout, all you fags sharin the same cell is laughs guy & If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside ^But while ur away, I took ya dame n' slayed her like a basic ho she'd tried to be classy, cept the only thing u can count on... is her givin each abacus before fellatio Im all around better..battle, swag, topical n' always had the brighter melon but I'll put this ina way you can understand: ..you may rock skinny jeans... but Im still waaayyy tighter denim Im witty as fuck.. hire goons to grab you, then all it takes is a coupla jabs dude & if u doubt ive gotta sharp penned intellect here.. you havent seen his stab wounds its been over, no crystal ball or black magic & Im so ahead my time... ... Im votin on Lecture vs Nigma in the loser brackets...P.S. your gettin ya ass kicked |
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That battle record is horrible your lines long & aint none of em coo
them verses you jot are lull, they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U so how you gonna take it when you aint even master the Element of the win? v NCPD put you in timeout, all you fags sharin the same cell is laughs guy & If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside & Im so ahead my time... ... Im votin on Lecture vs Nigma in the loser brackets...P.S. your gettin ya ass kicked Vote: Lecture. Felt Utmost had the dopest closure, but overall Lecture was consistent throughout his entire verse. I felt Utmost had a lot of lines that wasn't directed at his opponent, but rather Lecture's girl and upping himself etc. Shit like that don't hit well in my book. Overall Lecture had the better verse imo.
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I got utmost here
Lecture had put pryde to the side. Nothing else really Utmost was pretty solid all the way hrough. The abacus shit was dope imo btw. A lot more creative and impactful verse by far V-utmost
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I got utmost here
Lecture had pride to the side and l's around you Utmost had the abacus bar the the denim bar I fled utmost came more harder with his bars and made more of an impact. Lecture wasn't bad he just had more misses than utmost.
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Pretty even matched. I had one legit quote for each; pryde for lecture and abacus for utmost. Both had some played lines. Utmost misses were less played than lectures. Close.
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Lecture
if you put your pride to the side you'd see your a complete dunce but if we put Pryde to the side, you ain't had a real win in over 3 fuckin months This quick verse & round 1 share common ground, not that im proud of it but even though its completely half assed Im still getting the Most out of it Utmost NCPD put you in timeout, all you fags sharin the same cell is laughs guy & If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside ^But while ur away, I took ya dame n' slayed her like a basic ho she'd tried to be classy, cept the only thing u can count on... is her givin each abacus before fellatio Got both even for the most part...They both had a horibble miss, like Ut with the denim line which has been done for ages. And Lecture with his strectched/ hamstring line. Ima have to go Utmost here tho, besides the two horrible lines Ut had the better misses V/Utmost |
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Good battle
I think lec win That lul line was creative Both surprised me Good shit
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