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Old 07-18-2013, 05:36 PM   #1
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The Regular Battle

Thisround is a regular battle and will start off the elements tourney



you know the rules to battling/topicals/ssnf we shouldnt have to explain them to you



lines min-10
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VERSES ARE DUE THURSDAY THE 25TH


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Old 07-18-2013, 07:51 PM   #2
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Old 07-19-2013, 04:50 AM   #3
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fuck this.

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Old 07-26-2013, 12:49 AM   #4
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just sent a quick 10.
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Old 07-26-2013, 02:00 AM   #5
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Thinking your gonna win is ignorance
if you put your pride to the side you'd see your a complete dunce
but if we put Pryde to the side, you ain't had a real win in over 3 fuckin months
That battle record is horrible your lines long & aint none of em coo
them verses you jot are lull, they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U
Every punch you throw comes up short, your destined to fall
with concepts so stretched they could prevent pulled hamstrings & all
This quick verse & round 1 share common ground, not that im proud of it
but even though its completely half assed Im still getting the Most out of it
The name of this tourny requires perfection so the room for error is thin
so how you gonna take it when you aint even master the Element of the win?
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Old 07-26-2013, 03:45 AM   #6
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utmosts verse


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& If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside
^But while ur away, I took ya dame n' slayed her like a basic ho
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cept the only thing u can count on... is her givin each abacus before fellatio
Im all around better..battle, swag, topical n' always had the brighter melon
but I'll put this ina way you can understand:
..you may rock skinny jeans... but Im still waaayyy tighter denim
Im witty as fuck.. hire goons to grab you, then all it takes is a coupla jabs dude
& if u doubt ive gotta sharp penned intellect here.. you havent seen his stab wounds
its been over, no crystal ball or black magic
& Im so ahead my time...
... Im votin on Lecture vs Nigma in the loser brackets...P.S. your gettin ya ass kicked
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Old 07-28-2013, 08:05 AM   #8
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That battle record is horrible your lines long & aint none of em coo
them verses you jot are lull, they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U
they put us to sleep plus theres Ls all around U
so how you gonna take it when you aint even master the Element of the win?

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NCPD put you in timeout, all you fags sharin the same cell is laughs guy
& If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside
& Im so ahead my time...
... Im votin on Lecture vs Nigma in the loser brackets...P.S. your gettin ya ass kicked

Vote: Lecture.

Felt Utmost had the dopest closure, but overall Lecture was consistent throughout his entire verse. I felt Utmost had a lot of lines that wasn't directed at his opponent, but rather Lecture's girl and upping himself etc. Shit like that don't hit well in my book. Overall Lecture had the better verse imo.
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I got utmost here

Lecture had put pryde to the side. Nothing else really

Utmost was pretty solid all the way hrough. The abacus shit was dope imo btw. A lot more creative and impactful verse by far

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Old 07-29-2013, 05:58 PM   #10
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I got utmost here

Lecture had pride to the side and l's around you

Utmost had the abacus bar the the denim bar

I fled utmost came more harder with his bars and made more of an impact. Lecture wasn't bad he just had more misses than utmost.
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Pretty even matched. I had one legit quote for each; pryde for lecture and abacus for utmost. Both had some played lines. Utmost misses were less played than lectures. Close.

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Old 07-30-2013, 02:23 PM   #12
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if you put your pride to the side you'd see your a complete dunce
but if we put Pryde to the side, you ain't had a real win in over 3 fuckin months
This quick verse & round 1 share common ground, not that im proud of it
but even though its completely half assed Im still getting the Most out of it

Utmost

NCPD put you in timeout, all you fags sharin the same cell is laughs guy
& If i see you i'll 'notify Rawn M.' since thats what he's prolly doin to your backside
^But while ur away, I took ya dame n' slayed her like a basic ho
she'd tried to be classy,
cept the only thing u can count on... is her givin each abacus before fellatio



Got both even for the most part...They both had a horibble miss, like Ut with the denim line which has been done for ages. And Lecture with his strectched/ hamstring line. Ima have to go Utmost here tho, besides the two horrible lines Ut had the better misses

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Old 07-30-2013, 02:49 PM   #13
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Good battle

I think lec win

That lul line was creative

Both surprised me

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