putting oomph to your tracks

[Bodey]

i been workin on this track for almost a week now and the lyrics are good. i got my emotions right in it too, probly the best i've ever done from what you've heard from me in the past.

i dont have a chorus and even though it's lyrically there, i'm still not happy nor impressed with it. it's missing something. something that'll give it excitement. any suggestions?

[Half Wit It]

Listen to it high or drunk or both and see if you still can't vibe to it.

If not then maybe switch instrumentals.

[Kin]

Doubles....addlibs....beat drops

[Fig]

I'd literally say "oomph" as an adlib

at the end of every bar should work

[Badweather]

I'd walk away from it, and come back to it later.

[anime_boners]

entered thread with the intent of telling you i'd put some "oomph" in you.. then I saw this.

Originally Posted by Figurative

I'd literally say "oomph" as an adlib

at the end of every bar should work

i like this idea and think you should try it

[Bodey]

lmao thanks guys, guess i set myself up for that one

and yeah, i havent touched it for a day but then it'll bother me. this voice will be hovering like "YOU NEED TO FIX THIS NOWWWW"

it's also frustrating to have to cut out certain chunks of lines so that you can flow them to the beat. it just sucks cuz on freestyle, i rip this beat. but when i wrote to part of it, i spit slower... and more boring i guess. that pisses me off. i want to smash this beat like a giant penis jamming into a pussy and getting stuck. thats how big a smash...