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Old 07-09-2014, 02:17 PM   #1
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Default Wanna Be in Willoughby

All my boss can ever say is you got to go and push it son
I just sit back and reply "Hey, boss, you gotta look, it's done!"
Company lost 3 Million bucks, but that's chump change to us
I swear I'm always stressed and it's always over the same stuff
My co-workers don't care, nobody wants to stand for me
I was so flustered that I implied that the man's obese
Kicked out without a job, at least I could spend time with my wife
She said she'd kill me, told her to and she actually tried
Fuck! When I close my eyes, sometimes all I see is stress
And when they're open, There's this damn whore who "needs" a dress
I wish there was some kind of place, where nobody had problems
Nobody cared about money, for they laid around jobless!
My wife's so mad, but at least I can sleep on this nice couch
I don't take control, but I really should 'cause it's my house
I'll have to go back to beg for my job, I'll lose my dignity
But the boss was in a good mood, he was just listening
Went home on the train, there was something a man was telling me
"Next Stop----" I drowned him out, and then I just fell asleep



"Willoughby" he said, the next stop is Willoughby
Ugh what's wrong with my head? This guys killing me
He told me I could get off, live here forever
It's always sunny here, perfect here, the weather
Everyone's so friendly, children are fishing
Yet there's something I'm not feeling- what's missing?
I'll forget my wife, forget that I know her
I really can't wait to start my life over
I hop off the train- now I'm just excited
The town is great! Ha, Now let's fucking try this
And the night's lit! I was lucky to get room keys
Extremely tired to- So now I'm going to sleep











"This is the craziest attempt of suicide I've ever seen."
I know, he muttered something about Willoughby and jumped right off."
"How strange."
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Old 07-15-2014, 01:34 PM   #2
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Old 07-29-2014, 05:10 PM   #3
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Old 07-29-2014, 05:25 PM   #4
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How hard is for people to understand if you want feed then feed other people?

Since you dropped this and didn't leave feed then, and a month later you decide to up it without leaving feed again, I'm closing this. You want it reopened then go feed people and I'll personally feed it.
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