FGR v Pryde - {FGR wins}

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@FGR @Pryde

[FGR]

check

@FGR @Pryde

[FGR]

i wrote this quick you hobo's dick..i'll neva pay homage to this geek
if i show the utmost respect, it's props to him for trashing ur last week
FGR snap yah spine for thinking ur fine. lately u been comin off sweet
so i'll bend yah vertebrae the wrong way until it gets you back on ur feet
prydes funeral is today. face it i'm known to casket bitches..
when i suture body in all black cuz thats the common color of stitches
i'm dope w/ the hits bro. in the punch league your never mentioned
except you struggling w/ meth..idk whether to joke or setup a intervention
this disgusting pedo isnt beating me in this battle. all his punchs suck
im leaving here w/ minor bruises, like when u climb on ur baby sister to fuck

[FGR]

....

[Greed]

Your city hate you youre not that dude, your lazy punches are remnicent of fat kids
If this young philly want it with the god that's cool... but this gonna turn out way different then that did
You wack and low tier.... or maybe your actually a genius in person
Maybe its just your acting roll, and get in character with terrible verses
Nahh this man a birdwatching butterfly catcher, clearly as soft as things get
..I mean I dont think he means hood hopper when he talks about swing sets
Even tho he phony i would never box with fgr, theres other things I'd much rather be doing
This man's a runner... If we was in the ring his travel around it would span three movie's
Id beat yo ass cruelly, you can't see me and there isn't a man that could
Fuck a grapple, If I pick you up I'm dropping you off like aaron hernandez would

[Spoken]

Utmost, casket, vertebrae

Vs.

Hoodhopper, Character, hernandez

Both equal on the quotes but I gotta go with FGR.. Felt the humor factor and solidness of the verse as a whole was good. Pryde ya three quotables from me was the only line si liked. Props to both tho but I got FGr

[Atomic]

i wrote this quick you hobo's dick..i'll neva pay homage to this geek
if i show the utmost respect, it's props to him for trashing ur last week
decent
FGR snap yah spine for thinking ur fine. lately u been comin off sweet
so i'll bend yah vertebrae the wrong way until it gets you back on ur feet
lolwtf, k
prydes funeral is today. face it i'm known to casket bitches..
when i suture body in all black cuz thats the common color of stitches
punch/wp is cool, connection is okay
i'm dope w/ the hits bro. in the punch league your never mentioned
except you struggling w/ meth..idk whether to joke or setup a intervention
idc if it's played i liked it.
this disgusting pedo isnt beating me in this battle. all his punchs suck
im leaving here w/ minor bruises, like when u climb on ur baby sister to fuck
rofl, k

//

Your city hate you youre not that dude, your lazy punches are remnicent of fat kids
If this young philly want it with the god that's cool... but this gonna turn out way different then that did
meh, ok
You wack and low tier.... or maybe your actually a genius in person
Maybe its just your acting roll, and get in character with terrible verses
ehhh
Nahh this man a birdwatching butterfly catcher, clearly as soft as things get
..I mean I dont think he means hood hopper when he talks about swing sets
meh
Even tho he phony i would never box with fgr, theres other things I'd much rather be doing
This man's a runner... If we was in the ring his travel around it would span three movie's
so simple
Id beat yo ass cruelly, you can't see me and there isn't a man that could
Fuck a grapple, If I pick you up I'm dropping you off like aaron hernandez would
kinda late for that concept lolz.

//

v/ FGR. I like the kids style, has cool concepts and normally the connections are on point as well. Pryde was just too simple & statementish for me, but meh, it's all opinion I guess. FGR got 'em.

[Gazette]

i wrote this quick you hobo's dick..i'll neva pay homage to this geek
if i show the utmost respect, it's props to him for trashing ur last week

decent. lol @hobo's dick. i found that funnier than i probably should have. not a fan of phrases like 'i wrote this quick'
in verses, always feels like a bit of a backstep.

FGR snap yah spine for thinking ur fine. lately u been comin off sweet
so i'll bend yah vertebrae the wrong way until it gets you back on ur feet

eeeeh, yh, works, lovetap tho. single syll rhymes annoy me

prydes funeral is today. face it i'm known to casket bitches..
when i suture body in all black cuz thats the common color of stitches

ok

i'm dope w/ the hits bro. in the punch league your never mentioned
except you struggling w/ meth..idk whether to joke or setup a intervention

best line so far, witty nameplay

this disgusting pedo isnt beating me in this battle. all his punchs suck
im leaving here w/ minor bruises, like when u climb on ur baby sister to fuck

nah, weak closer
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vs



Your city hate you youre not that dude, your lazy punches are remnicent of fat kids
If this young philly want it with the god that's cool... but this gonna turn out way different then that did

coulda chopped this down a bit but it works alright, i got the point

You wack and low tier.... or maybe your actually a genius in person
Maybe its just your acting roll, and get in character with terrible verses

eh, nah, played concept n bad delivery

Nahh this man a birdwatching butterfly catcher, clearly as soft as things get
..I mean I dont think he means hood hopper when he talks about swing sets

nah, too random

Even tho he phony i would never box with fgr, theres other things I'd much rather be doing
This man's a runner... If we was in the ring his travel around it would span three movie's

again, this concept had potential, its the delivery letting you down, gotta make the setup / punch snappier / clearer

Id beat yo ass cruelly, you can't see me and there isn't a man that could
Fuck a grapple, If I pick you up I'm dropping you off like aaron hernandez would

ok.


v/FGR for more consistency / better execution

[Maximus]

came face to face with Decibel but lyrically you're far from sound
you're the biggest bitch on this site and u aint gutter u're scared
got enough sand in ur pussy to keep glass factories running for years