Don't Wait.

Clayray · 09-07-2014, 06:47 AM

They say that time waits for no man
it's a wasted treasure in this land
a faceless pleasure that we take for granted
the time we're handed.. no dollar sign to date can measure..

"Everyone is so rushed in the world today
Don't flush life & let it be swirled away
Flourish to the grave, have courage & be brave"

As me and my grandson reminisce on the past
I tell him about my mistakes & how I dismissed what I had
I twist & I grasp how ignorant and foolish I had been
not to mention the brilliant schooling I had missed
the love connections I could of had
I know no ones perfect but truly... it made me sad
as I'm teary eyed I look at the lessons I taught my grandson
I can't clearly hide that the past held my thoughts for ransom
I'm speechless as nothing seems to escape my mouth
I'm reaching towards bleakness, minds a drape or shroud..
hearts failing out.. but I smile one last time
because my past can't frustrate me now

Piece I did on RB. Thought it would be cool to show this side of my writing. And to get some feedback.

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09-07-2014, 06:47 AM	#1
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Don't Wait. They say that time waits for no man it's a wasted treasure in this land a faceless pleasure that we take for granted the time we're handed.. no dollar sign to date can measure.. "Everyone is so rushed in the world today Don't flush life & let it be swirled away Flourish to the grave, have courage & be brave" As me and my grandson reminisce on the past I tell him about my mistakes & how I dismissed what I had I twist & I grasp how ignorant and foolish I had been not to mention the brilliant schooling I had missed the love connections I could of had I know no ones perfect but truly... it made me sad as I'm teary eyed I look at the lessons I taught my grandson I can't clearly hide that the past held my thoughts for ransom I'm speechless as nothing seems to escape my mouth I'm reaching towards bleakness, minds a drape or shroud.. hearts failing out.. but I smile one last time because my past can't frustrate me now Piece I did on RB. Thought it would be cool to show this side of my writing. And to get some feedback. 1. Last edited by Clayray; 09-07-2014 at 07:11 AM.