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Erebus
Join Date: Jun 2013
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![]() Minutes bled into hours until days had passed
Since I suddenly slipped from enslavement's grasp The markings of shackles disappear from my vision Their crimson tint fades with my reason for living Freedom... the idle wish of a dreaming captive We wonder if one day we'd even have it I never figured I'd ever have to think to plan it Never thought of the gameplan if my wish was granted Can you return to water a freed ship from a bottle? Now eating in soup kitchens and sleeping in hostels Where fleas and disease sleep under the sheets Such a colourless contrast for something that's free Plates suffocated in slop, the most dreary of meals Next to fresh food consumed with Valyrian steel But still I'd survive the slip in the standard I've lived Had I regained my chance to interact with the kids I get teary eyed when reminiscing upon what I leave behind I would teach their eager minds to read and write Their eyes viewed my presence as a fountain of wisdom Not an ex-slave that's been reduced down to a victim Their books wrapped in silk and each sentence I quote Surpassing the worth and expense of my robes Their value however... is much greater than that When they acknowledge my knowledge I gain a way and a path I feel more like an equal when I focus on the lessons And yet with no goods to my name, I'm still holding some possessions But now? Nothing, it's all been taken apart My cabinets as empty as the space in my heart Despite being owned and whipped like someone's mutt I had the love that comes with unencumbered trust A hound's mission and goal is most certainly service Yet as man's best friend it is serving it's purpose So if freedom is choice then I'll seal my fate Because freedom for me... is to be a slave |
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this waas great, especially the line...
"Can you return to water a freed ship from a bottle?" cus a ship built in a bottle is a lot like a slave itself, looking like a ship/person but not being considered a ship/person, then when its out of the bottle/slavery it might question if its really a ship, like ur slave did in the climax, accepting his slavery. very well done.
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