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![]() ![]() the universe awaits your every second. petty presence, pen depression, inking SETI essence, India think- bleeding blessings between the sheets. leaving me uneasy, an easy speech to meet with condescension. conic sections. For you, I'd separate your brain, sectumsempra, and taste your estrogen- to say I sent you another message: defeat. standing in a row, as losses do. candy-coated Xanadu. I'm handing you the consequences, twenty some-odd recruits. flooding oxygen in dropping tubes (abandon ship) God is bending honest truth to set me wrong in lauding you. you're a false symbol. inanimate. inanimetamphetamine. I knew that from the start. yet it's everything. they say the masks to help you breathe calm you for your death, as your weldings seize, altimeter ticks to administer descents of self-esteem. the rush. oxygen high. gushing homicide. I love to lie, for lyings sake, in sincerity, as the rusting anaconda on its side tears away, punctures lungs of plummeting spectral peculiarities- uncertainty meets exception, in this planar crash. bleeding vessels. teeming cesspools, greater than leaving mental, metal, energies in the rain, a flaming crash. I met destiny in the wake of fate, accepting anything to set it straight. it doesn't make sense, now. I'm sure it will. |
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
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conic sections. For you, I'd separate your brain, sectumsempra
Lol loving the abstract imagery, great vocabulary and references through out. That line above stuck out for me as a great as an example... To be honest that whole part was fire nice flow as well. God is bending honest truth to set me wrong in lauding you. you're a false symbol. inanimate. inanimetamphetamine. That was the best bit for me..Loved that some seriously thinking must of been in that. To be honest while good the rest kind of fell off for me a bit, started to become a little confusing but that's more a lack of concentration my part probably because im shattered. Good drop keep it up |
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This is the best Split Eight topical I've ever read.
However, it is also the worst. Because I've read one. Good shit. |
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