Audio - acid rain spickets

Bodey · 04-10-2014, 01:09 AM

http://soundcloud.com/badiali/distur...eatpro/s-BfaRp
Note- starts at 37 seconds and ends at 1.40

Lyrics:
Tally me the casualty for dippin out reality
Spit immoral fallacies, it really wouldn't scatter me
Dip their minds in batteries and they'll outsmart catastrophe
I'm mastering these happenings like rappin beats
caused fastenings to blasphemies that wrap and weave inside of me til atrophy
Humanity is at a loss for wits, that constant grip on politics
The talkin shit, the Fox News bitch- an office over all of it
The cops equipped to taze us quick til death clogs the esophagus
Got the shits? Where's the doctor's script that you're so awesome with?
Cuz who cares to call it quits when your kids know that Mom's a bitch
Who cares about their college wins, you'll do everything to swallow it
But wait, don't get off of it. For all you know the world's nearing an apocalypse
No hate-limits on pain clinics that hit it, my veins smitten
These lame critics who strain kids with a vague sniff upon fake bitches
The snake bit it and sank in til it changed quick into laced liquids
I'm raped wicked, no shame given. Takin sips from acid rain spickets

e11even · 04-10-2014, 04:26 AM

Wow. Your delivery is great. I think this is very eminem-ish on audio, which is dope. I think im gonna listen to the rest. Good shit.

Witty · 04-10-2014, 05:52 AM

I'll get back to this with more feed later, but this was dope.

Witty knows dope when he sees/hears it, and Witty says this is dope.

Props.

Dope girl · 04-10-2014, 10:25 AM

dopeness right here girl! decent Delivery.

Exis · 04-12-2014, 11:14 AM

Nice shit...long ass intro though, started at around 43 seconds for me but yeah...your delivery like most have said was tight with it.Ive heard a few of your audio joints before and this was right up there ma...so kudos, good stuff.

Stay upwards.

King Ra. · 04-12-2014, 01:45 PM

Miss Ali throws a few jabs and lands a wicked haymaker. I love this shit. Very well done.

Mitch · 04-12-2014, 02:48 PM

Sounds alright, you voice doesn't very natural, tonewise. Try to sound more natural, or don't try to sound different then you naturally would, or maybe the anger just didn't fit the song for me. Don't be discouraged from this criticism, it sounded good, just a tad cliche.

Fig · 04-12-2014, 02:51 PM

I.can't listen on mobile :(

Badweather · 04-12-2014, 04:21 PM

Pretty good. A little choppy in a couple of areas syllable wise, and there were a couple of words that I couldn't understand. I know it's hard to cut words or phrases out for the sake of a smoother listen, but you'll figure that out on your own. Good to see you finally started recording written material.

Feel free to return a listen.

04-10-2014, 04:26 AM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Wow. Your delivery is great. I think this is very eminem-ish on audio, which is dope. I think im gonna listen to the rest. Good shit. __________________ Ahem.

04-10-2014, 05:52 AM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	I'll get back to this with more feed later, but this was dope. Witty knows dope when he sees/hears it, and Witty says this is dope. Props. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

04-12-2014, 01:45 PM	#6
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Miss Ali throws a few jabs and lands a wicked haymaker. I love this shit. Very well done. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

04-12-2014, 02:48 PM	#7
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	Sounds alright, you voice doesn't very natural, tonewise. Try to sound more natural, or don't try to sound different then you naturally would, or maybe the anger just didn't fit the song for me. Don't be discouraged from this criticism, it sounded good, just a tad cliche. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

04-12-2014, 02:51 PM	#8
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	I.can't listen on mobile :( __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

04-10-2014, 10:25 AM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	dopeness right here girl! decent Delivery.

04-12-2014, 11:14 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Nice shit...long ass intro though, started at around 43 seconds for me but yeah...your delivery like most have said was tight with it.Ive heard a few of your audio joints before and this was right up there ma...so kudos, good stuff. Stay upwards.

04-12-2014, 04:21 PM	#9
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Pretty good. A little choppy in a couple of areas syllable wise, and there were a couple of words that I couldn't understand. I know it's hard to cut words or phrases out for the sake of a smoother listen, but you'll figure that out on your own. Good to see you finally started recording written material. Feel free to return a listen. __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.