Untold vs Flo Real {Untold wins}

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@Untold
@Flo Real

[Untold]

Here

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6435

[Flow]

Matt.....Damon

[Flow]

The trash you've come out with recently cunt, couldn't be shitter
Seriously his lines are so bad, its no surprise this runt gets rejected by litter
I poked your bitch so deep I left that bitch on the floor out cold
He tried playin poke-her an leaves her disappointed when it ends quick and un-folds
I beat whoever I face wherever it is, I'm known as a safe bet bitch
you’ll sever n bleed, Cus however i end and whenever I leave, I'll leave un-bested
a picture speaks a thousand words, while yours seems adamant not to talk
to be honest i wouldn’t show my face off either if it looked like it had caught fire and been put out with forks
Didnt just fuck your mrs I bounced up and down on the bitch in the literal sense
Daayyme.... she looked like she was poured into them clothes..... and then forgot to say when

[Untold]

Ext?

[Flow]

Course - I don't like no show wins - make it count ;)

[Untold]

Flo's equilibrium's off. He's an unstable, un confident kid
Only New Balance u'll find.. Is the one I leave in ya ass from stompin it in
Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum
When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one
Ya neva grind on the street or supplyin the heat. Ur the scaredest coward
but if ya hustle n flo, ur a cracked out white bitch bein pimped by Terrance Howard
ur in a humble career mate, fastfood is ya clear fate
u'll make Sonic boom, n be employee of the month at the drive thru a year strait
when it comes to chicks, u prefer suckin dicks. i'll be honest n say
That if a bitch look into Realize, she'll do that n be aware ya obviously gay

[Undead.]

UN

Flo's equilibrium's off. He's an unstable, un confident kid
Only New Balance u'll find.. Is the one I leave in ya ass from stompin it in

Not a hard hit. but creative.

Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum
When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one

Creative nice WP. This was cool & LOL

Ya neva grind on the street or supplyin the heat. Ur the scaredest coward
but if ya hustle n flo, ur a cracked out white bitch bein pimped by Terrance Howard

forced ur multi. could've made this hit harder. Worded it differently. good angle just wish the execution matched.


ur in a humble career mate, fastfood is ya clear fate
u'll make Sonic boom, n be employee of the month at the drive thru a year strait

meh

when it comes to chicks, u prefer suckin dicks. i'll be honest n say
That if a bitch look into Realize, she'll do that n be aware ya obviously gay

LOL smooth WP. this was cool.

vs.

FLO

The trash you've come out with recently cunt, couldn't be shitter
Seriously his lines are so bad, its no surprise this runt gets rejected by litter

Forced."couldn't be shittier" not shitter, there bud. Ur set up doesn't correlate canine/runt of the litter.. good idea but poorly executed

I poked your bitch so deep I left that bitch on the floor out cold
He tried playin poke-her an leaves her disappointed when it ends quick and un-folds

Cool NF. this one was ur best line imo.

I beat whoever I face wherever it is, I'm known as a safe bet bitch
you’ll sever n bleed, Cus however i end and whenever I leave, I'll leave un-bested

Ehh..not a fan the un flips are getting old...fast. i liked the other one better tbh. this one was ok

a picture speaks a thousand words, while yours seems adamant not to talk
to be honest i wouldn’t show my face off either if it looked like it had caught fire and been put out with forks

tooo long winded bud, not effect for me. and doesnt rhyme..


Didnt just fuck your mrs I bounced up and down on the bitch in the literal sense
Daayyme.... she looked like she was poured into them clothes..... and then forgot to say when

"I didnt" u meant to say? i dislike how you word things. It comes off as forced. This is to indirect for my taste. Ur not battling his "mrs." ur battling untold..its cool to ref it but keep the actual punch on ur opponent

V/ Untold

he was more direct. better attempts..smoother wordplay & better flow. Just the better verse. Flo u need to cut ur wordin down & word ur bars better entirely. U have lotto smirkish type quips. To wordy. all in all good battle guys.

[Strikta]

Flo Real:

The trash you've come out with recently cunt, couldn't be shitter
Seriously his lines are so bad, its no surprise this runt gets rejected by litter
...Not really feeling this opener
I poked your bitch so deep I left that bitch on the floor out cold
He tried playin poke-her an leaves her disappointed when it ends quick and un-folds
...This is kinda played, & ineffective
I beat whoever I face wherever it is, I'm known as a safe bet bitch
you’ll sever n bleed, Cus however i end and whenever I leave, I'll leave un-bested
...Nah
a picture speaks a thousand words, while yours seems adamant not to talk
to be honest i wouldn’t show my face off either if it looked like it had caught fire and been put out with forks
...Eh, ok
Didnt just fuck your mrs I bounced up and down on the bitch in the literal sense
Daayyme.... she looked like she was poured into them clothes..... and then forgot to say when
...I see the concept, but u didn't execute properly

Vs.

Untold:

Flo's equilibrium's off. He's an unstable, un confident kid
Only New Balance u'll find.. Is the one I leave in ya ass from stompin it in
...Ok opener, kinda played tho
Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum
When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one
...This was dope to me
Ya neva grind on the street or supplyin the heat. Ur the scaredest coward
but if ya hustle n flo, ur a cracked out white bitch bein pimped by Terrance Howard
...Cool
ur in a humble career mate, fastfood is ya clear fate
u'll make Sonic boom, n be employee of the month at the drive thru a year strait
...Eh, ok
when it comes to chicks, u prefer suckin dicks. i'll be honest n say
That if a bitch look into Realize, she'll do that n be aware ya obviously gay
...Cool closer

This was a cool lil battle, tho I saw it as being 1 sided. Untold took this w/ harsher hits & better wording. Flo had a couple decent concepts but didn't really pull em' off the right way imo. I got Untold taking this, & the Brochure line was lotb. Props to both here.

Vote- Untold

[StarFaggot]

Flo your only decent line was the fire forks joke but that's a popularly used comedic rip so it's like ehh. The rest was nah.

Untold your hustle n flow was lulz the rest was avg but decently creative.

Mvgt Untold

[Boredom]

fire forks

vs

hustle n flow, brochure and realize was all pretty lolz

all in all unt had the harder hitters w/ more consistency. flo was pretty long winded and had a lack of execution.. concept choice was a little off as well so for that reason mvgt untold.

[megatron]

Brochure, realize n hustlenflow

Vs

Unfold

Didn't care for flow verse.. tbh wording killed it.for.me... concepts where decent but they just came off corny IMO guess u can say just not my style...verse. of bad jokes ... UN had the more consistent verse n harder hitters untold gets my vote

[Cashius]

Fire put out by forks

Vs.

Brochure, sonic boom

Untold had a pretty consistent verse. He took it.

[R!canTheoryz]

Fire/forks Line Was pretty cool I've seen that concept flipped numerous times
But urs worked fine, untold had that brochure line I made one not long ago myself yours was worded alot better lol and sonic boom was neat.

Vote - untold he had lesser misses and landed alot more decent battle