Domestic whinin with textual assault

Bodey · 04-09-2014, 01:43 AM

Look what ya did now
Ran your head into the ground
Practically through a wall
Without a drop of alcohol
I'm the master of self-sabotage
I'd make you wana slap a broad
A plastered fuck masked by mirage
It's like I live for it with avid cause
Can't begin to internalize the root for how I'm freakin
A good night with disturbed demise in a house you're sposed to be in
Today started out like gravy but after sunset it betrayed me
Suddenly I raged crazy and the monster came out and chased me
after pacing around and banging so loud it woke the neighbor's baby
"What explanation can you offer me after screeching off the property?"
I don't know babe, I don't know what the fuck is wrong with me
Celexa might be robbin me of the sanity not conjuring
Or maybe it's the chronic leaf? But honestly, it's probly me
Could've jogged the street to blow off steam but instead I sobbed and screamed
Insisting I was sorry, please, but you just said "nope, talk is cheap"
"You've got the hottest queen with a flower gleam,
And you just treat it rotten, mocked and mean
Stop it please, you awful being.
Do you plot and scheme these evil things?"
I'm on my wackest slate with these raps so lame
Spittin the saddest things from a squeezed flaccid brain
I feel the wrath of hate, a tad of shame
but another shot makes it all eradicate
Give me a flask of paint cuz I don't pass up a drank
More thoughts to masticate before my gasket breaks
And my car blows up and the gas tank flames
But just as I escape outside its weight,
my clothes are soaked from acid rain
Sorry I was a basket case who masked her pain
with dope or smack that waxed her veins
And as I look down from the clouds so gray,
I find myself laying in a casket wake

A drunken-inspired written I jotted in my pad within an hr of it happening. That's why some of the flow is choppy throughout

Write drunk, edit sober. I know. But I figured I'd give you the raw version as it happened on paper

e11even · 04-09-2014, 02:57 AM

Disclaimer in mind, this was dope. Your flow was 78% consistent, and even though it trailed off at the end, I still dug it. Welcome back to the OM.

04-09-2014, 02:57 AM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Disclaimer in mind, this was dope. Your flow was 78% consistent, and even though it trailed off at the end, I still dug it. Welcome back to the OM. __________________ Ahem.