Genocide & IAmBent: Grab Ur Fucking Pens!

[Geno]

Whuddup iambent, I'm saying man. Thesemy complacent ass.. dormant ass niggas need to wake up again man. You know what I'm talkin bout? Like for real though, what happened to the fire, where's that passion for writing, the shit that used to keep netcees alive and shit. Look, we need to talk about something that's gonna wake these niggas up again man, you know?

Anything man..
Something deep..
Something they can feel..
Whatever comes to mind first..
Something like..
Eyo..

Geno..
All this hardworks fucking intense, nothing but stress
Blood rate is pumped, hearts about to jump through my chest
Under my breath, the cold words of a nigga who's had it
Pressures upping, tempers touchy like my symptoms pneumatic
Lord forgive my new fashion, I've been so in a daze -lost
Baphomet around my neck, I'm only hoping it pays off
I sold my soul and the faiths gone, but i autographed it in blood
So if it makes its way home, u'll know who its passenger was
This life is like a scavenger hunt, searching for happiness here
Killing ourselves to pay debts is such a fucking tragic carreer
My drug habits severe, adhered, glued to this fabric of mine
Crack intertwined, so many smoke screens that im magically high
The battle inside never ends, better friends are enemies now
Chemically bound, about to explode if they don't let my acetalyne out
Emptying valves, turning the screws that attatch to my neck
Cause every man has his vice, the same way he has his regrets

IamBenT..
No doubt, G.. Laziness is a curse, and some of these cats are bewitched!

Indolent fucks! I've witnessed enough, time to revisit
The exhibits of illness that lift me up to my peak limits
We kickin- that beat splitting steel, the real in metal text
These settled heads so lack-a-daisy-cal...
....like Luigi seeking that crazy ho, in a yellow dress
I'm a ghetto vet, with more vocab than the whole staff
At Merriam's, so ME and G bury em like cherries at ya Local Cold Slab
I'm known to throat-stab like you ate a chip wrong
Murderous words to rape syllables like a bitch with dipped-thong
"Dude, You're lift's wrong", that's no way to get ya bars up
Alpo told yu me and G-no bout to blow, yo don't get star-struck....

Going the distance, we know in an instant what lingers late
When we flow, we go Insync with the dopest of instincts, no Timberlake
Mind's gone off these lines, long as time this site's waited
For rhymes strong as lions to go ride Open Mic pages
Le *sigh*.. when we write, we fight the good fight, soldier..
It's like the club's closed and we're quite sober, in other words - The night's over...

And a new day dawns on the wreckage that is..
The Open mic after Bent and Gen finished etching this shit....

Geno..
Damn son, I feel you right. I mean yo.. you took it to a whole different mentality right there. That shit makes me wanna go in on some shit like.. some positive hype shit. Feel like I need to catch up or something homie. Ima go in like this then..

Eyo..
Regular cat, who's unique style leaves no contention in rap
Venomous tracks, its either that or theyre adrenaline packed
To hit your gut like a medicine bag, got you up in your head
With thoughts so deep, they feel like a concussion instead
My gun is the pen, this ball point is like a tech when gripped
Recitals have you doing the worm naked, epileptic shit
Kevlar vest equipped, these rhymes are war on the track
Murder -murder, kill -kill, nothings more important then that
The unfortunate fact, there's way to many broads on the web
My mind state is go hard, you fagots fucking soft in ur heads
Bang!

[Zen]

(slow clap)
Well done. Seriously this shit was an epic. It started off crazy with Geno droppin his psychotic verse of illness, only to be picked back up and carried through by Bent and a lyrical suave like only Bent can do, to be finished off with a blitzkrieg by Adolf Spitler.
(I like that breakdown I just gave lol)
But in all seriousness this was dope guys. Hella long but definatly worth the read. Ill.

[IamBenT]

Love that "doing the worm naked" line, wow funny shit, the whole verse is BANANAS don't sleep!!

[dead man]

genocide - i feel like you should be doing music, like actual music. you seem to drop new verses like everyday so i know you have a passion and motivational drive to create this sort of thing pretty consistently, so why not explore other routes?

Lord forgive my new fashion, I've been so in a daze -lost
Baphomet around my neck, I'm only hoping it pays off

The battle inside never ends, better friends are enemies now
Chemically bound, about to explode if they don't let my acetalyne out

so sick to me. especially the last line.

i've had a tendency to skip over some of your verses, admittedly, because they have run together for their lack of distinction in terms of subject matter and tone. its like you could really just put a shitload of them together in a single huge verse and just spit it on a loop, and that could be a really tight song. do a whole album like that. no hooks.

but every now and then you just drop some fierce shit. and i am reminded that i need to stop skipping over your shit.


iambent. bro.. that luigi / daisy wordplay punchline whatever was horrible. lol you heard it here first. that should have not made it through your drafting process, and if you didnt have one, you probably should have.

your verse did not match geno's level of raw lyricism or heavy handedness. but you had your moments for sure and the styles contrasted in a complementary way in spots.

Going the distance, we know in an instant what lingers late
When we flow, we go Insync with the dopest of instincts, no Timberlake
Mind's gone off these lines, long as time this site's waited
For rhymes strong as lions to go ride Open Mic pages

apart from the pretty lame big sean delivery in your second line this whole section was nice. especially enjoyed the last two.


Recitals have you doing the worm naked, epileptic shit
Kevlar vest equipped, these rhymes are war on the track
Murder -murder, kill -kill, nothings more important then that

lmao. pretty sure this i geno at the end. i fucked with this. reminiscent of an old bone thugz style. probably bizzy or layzie.


anyway good shit guys. glad you're working to keep this place running at optimum efficiency. im trying to do the same.


thanks



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[Natural]

I thought this was cool. Bent came harder on this one in my mind.
And ive seen geno use the bang thing a couple times b4 so i wasn't fond of that.
minor though.

Bummed i wasn't included because from a topic standpoint i could have wrote to this ish.
W/e tho.
Bent just came in a slaughtered it. I didn't like geno's first verse much. His second was fire though.

Hate the Eyo ish....ayo is better lmao....but who cares do u. Just irks me idk why

Its 3:48am so ill get a lil more in depth later.
Stay at it

[Mike Wrecka]

ya dope stuff guys.

geno - first verse was cool. a very audio style going on. probably more spittable than your usual stuff. enjoyed it. set it off proper

iambent- some dope lines, some attempts at humor that fell flat. ya that luigi line made me cringe as well. but it was really cool to see you able to get vicious with the flow outside the confines of a topical and write something with more swag. good stuff.

Indolent fucks! I've witnessed enough, time to revisit
The exhibits of illness that lift me up to my peak limits

that stood out to me. ill

then genos second verse was sick. he went bezerker mode and I thouroughly enjoyed it. used more multis which is his trademark. well done


awesome collab fellas .

[IamBenT]

in defense of Luigi..

the shit sounded ill when i spit it lol

that, and.. Mario get's too much play, anyways. Thanks for the feed everyone,

Geno is the man

[UnoQuattroThres]

I like the venting aspect of it. Some graphic shit and you know when it's put together cool when you look and you can hear what is being read. Marks of good writters. Topicals is always hard to get it's due shine and I think this one here shines bright amongst these drops. Steam was let off in a super creative way, and I thought the Luigi line was cool....

[Geno]

upppp grrrrrrrrr