*New* Mr 804 Ft. SiK "We Go Hard"

SiK · 03-12-2014, 07:56 PM

As usual Mr 804 on the beat, he also has the first verse...I got the chorus and second verse....feedback appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/thasikone-1/we-go-hard

SiK · 03-13-2014, 05:34 AM

Dont sleep. Up

Lars · 03-13-2014, 07:36 AM

i dont like the beat, feels like somethings missing to go with that horn? cant quite put my finger on it

i think you've got a good voice, nice pen game but there's a couple spots where you needed to take out a syllable or two from each line to have it flow better, sounded like you were trying to fit a whole bunch in before the high hat hit, nothing major and pretty easily remedied though

i aint a hater

keep doing your thing

SiK · 03-13-2014, 08:42 AM

@Lars , appreciate the feedback man. Respect

Badweather · 03-13-2014, 11:23 AM

sounds like a video game sample.

first dude, had good flow and a matching voice. i don't really fuck with the content, only 'cause i'm not about that life

you...that delay or reverb drowns out your voice a little, so it was difficult to hear all the punchlines clearly. aside from that it was a decent verse. i don't know you personally, so i don't know if you actually pop clips and shit, but eh. i didn't think you had too many syllables in any place, it flowed smooth to me. keep spittin'

Badweather · 03-13-2014, 11:25 AM

also...

guns and ballin' is a highly popular topic on the radio. so if you and your team are gonna talk about ballin' and having guns, do it differently than everyone else. set yourself apart, you know?

03-13-2014, 11:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Badweather

also...

guns and ballin' is a highly popular topic on the radio. so if you and your team are gonna talk about ballin' and having guns, do it differently than everyone else. set yourself apart, you know?

^ Word.

Hey other guy with the same name. Hate the fact that you and I have had this name since way back, lol. But I'll peep this shortly bro & drop some feed.

SiK · 03-13-2014, 12:19 PM

@Badweather , its not the reverb. Its the volumes. He originally made the beat to loud and then when we spit had to fuck with all the volumes. Its not the final product though were goina fix the production. I appreciate the feed bro.

Geno · 03-13-2014, 05:59 PM

following now.
it was coo;/ not huge om the content either, for whats its worth though.. i thought the shit could bang hard in the right place right time setting

03-14-2014, 01:20 PM

Finally listened. Forgot all about this.

Anyways, my thoughts. Not bad at all other then the instrumental drowning out vocals.

1st dude: Nice flow, I can tell he's comfortable on the mic. Presence was natural and breath control was nice. Bars were on point and went well with the topic of the song.

2nd dude: Decent flow, choppy in areas but nothing to major, seems you comfortable on the mic but in some areas as I stated the flow was choppy due to breath control, seems like you were trying to get out too much in one breath. But nothing too serious. Bars were nice, liked some of the simile's and puns.

Both had nice voices (No homo) - Sometimes you get dudes making audios with atrocious voices that should not be making audios. But voices were nice and both seem to have the basics down on audio presentation. Not bad, keep doing your thing.

03-12-2014, 07:56 PM	#1
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	New Mr 804 Ft. SiK "We Go Hard" As usual Mr 804 on the beat, he also has the first verse...I got the chorus and second verse....feedback appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/thasikone-1/we-go-hard

03-13-2014, 07:36 AM	#3
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	i dont like the beat, feels like somethings missing to go with that horn? cant quite put my finger on it i think you've got a good voice, nice pen game but there's a couple spots where you needed to take out a syllable or two from each line to have it flow better, sounded like you were trying to fit a whole bunch in before the high hat hit, nothing major and pretty easily remedied though i aint a hater keep doing your thing __________________ PROVEN BITER

03-13-2014, 11:23 AM	#5
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	sounds like a video game sample. first dude, had good flow and a matching voice. i don't really fuck with the content, only 'cause i'm not about that life you...that delay or reverb drowns out your voice a little, so it was difficult to hear all the punchlines clearly. aside from that it was a decent verse. i don't know you personally, so i don't know if you actually pop clips and shit, but eh. i didn't think you had too many syllables in any place, it flowed smooth to me. keep spittin' __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

03-13-2014, 11:25 AM	#6
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	also... guns and ballin' is a highly popular topic on the radio. so if you and your team are gonna talk about ballin' and having guns, do it differently than everyone else. set yourself apart, you know? __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

03-13-2014, 05:59 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	following now. it was coo;/ not huge om the content either, for whats its worth though.. i thought the shit could bang hard in the right place right time setting __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-13-2014, 05:34 AM	#2
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	Dont sleep. Up

03-13-2014, 08:42 AM	#4
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	@Lars , appreciate the feedback man. Respect

03-13-2014, 12:19 PM	#8
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	@Badweather , its not the reverb. Its the volumes. He originally made the beat to loud and then when we spit had to fuck with all the volumes. Its not the final product though were goina fix the production. I appreciate the feed bro.

03-14-2014, 01:20 PM	#10
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	Finally listened. Forgot all about this. Anyways, my thoughts. Not bad at all other then the instrumental drowning out vocals. 1st dude: Nice flow, I can tell he's comfortable on the mic. Presence was natural and breath control was nice. Bars were on point and went well with the topic of the song. 2nd dude: Decent flow, choppy in areas but nothing to major, seems you comfortable on the mic but in some areas as I stated the flow was choppy due to breath control, seems like you were trying to get out too much in one breath. But nothing too serious. Bars were nice, liked some of the simile's and puns. Both had nice voices (No homo) - Sometimes you get dudes making audios with atrocious voices that should not be making audios. But voices were nice and both seem to have the basics down on audio presentation. Not bad, keep doing your thing.