Of nature (quivering man child deluxe)

Fig · 03-14-2014, 02:57 AM

look, how pretty! am i pretty? how pretty am i?!
these eyes sink, dive deep to vermilion skies...
rhyme silly. rhyme willingly. the willing to Rhyme?
bly jilly dry rilly. tiger lily DIVINE.

rhyme to rhythms of chest thumpin at the summit of flight.
the best plummets strive to rid him of the unctuous height.
The wonder of fright. I'd gladly take a knife to my sunk stomach
or blunt truncheon club bludgeon at the luncheon tonight.
fuckit! I cum buckets on these dykes with the lalalalalalalala...

ahem, let me rephrase (fuck i forgot DUNGEON!)

I'm the urinal allah, with cake baking thorough. a sauna.
the raunch aroma always waltzing to neuronal nirvana.
you're Arnold Koala? fuck, I've been looking for you everywhere!

im a fag. a mad teen. an attitude hell bent,
with magazines packed to leave the well read... well, red!
(and thats the last one you'll get out of me) you scared the cell out of me!
this flasks been breathing since I fell on my head.

the diaphragm. breath. of course sex stings,
and these ribs about to fling like some corset strings.
bada boom bada bing, let the forfeit sing.
no? then shut the fuck up. let that whore get mean.

chaucer on flying saucers. on ketamine too.
a trying author. trying not-words. let the enemies swoon.
globby ghosts in reflections of spoons.
YOU'RE ALL FUCKIN, UPSIDE DOWN N SHIT.
hot fog. sticks on heavenly smooth.

Fig · 03-14-2014, 02:58 AM

I will return the feed

Vulgar · 03-15-2014, 12:36 PM

tiger lily DIVINE.
^lol

I'm the urinal allah
^lol

This is how you express yourself. This is how you play Checkers. Now play chess.

phaggot

Keep doing you

Zen · 03-15-2014, 01:00 PM

You in a dysfunctional relationship nigga.

Fig · 03-15-2014, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenland

You in a dysfunctional relationship nigga.

I kill that bitch

Zen · 03-15-2014, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fig

I kill that bitch

Good.

But I read this and enjoyed it because there is no doubt that you wrote and that you WANTED to write it. Most people who post in the om write what would be accepted so their e-friends they don't know will say things like, "awesome, bro. sick as hell nawmsayin?" When really their entire verse follows the formula of:

*insert generic emotion, rhyme A*
*describe the sky, rhyme A*

And the gayness continues from there. Keep writing random ass shit Fig because if you don't I'll be the only idiot doing it.

03-14-2014, 02:57 AM	#1
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	Of nature (quivering man child deluxe) look, how pretty! am i pretty? how pretty am i?! these eyes sink, dive deep to vermilion skies... rhyme silly. rhyme willingly. the willing to Rhyme? bly jilly dry rilly. tiger lily DIVINE. rhyme to rhythms of chest thumpin at the summit of flight. the best plummets strive to rid him of the unctuous height. The wonder of fright. I'd gladly take a knife to my sunk stomach or blunt truncheon club bludgeon at the luncheon tonight. fuckit! I cum buckets on these dykes with the lalalalalalalala... ahem, let me rephrase (fuck i forgot DUNGEON!) I'm the urinal allah, with cake baking thorough. a sauna. the raunch aroma always waltzing to neuronal nirvana. you're Arnold Koala? fuck, I've been looking for you everywhere! im a fag. a mad teen. an attitude hell bent, with magazines packed to leave the well read... well, red! (and thats the last one you'll get out of me) you scared the cell out of me! this flasks been breathing since I fell on my head. the diaphragm. breath. of course sex stings, and these ribs about to fling like some corset strings. bada boom bada bing, let the forfeit sing. no? then shut the fuck up. let that whore get mean. chaucer on flying saucers. on ketamine too. a trying author. trying not-words. let the enemies swoon. globby ghosts in reflections of spoons. YOU'RE ALL FUCKIN, UPSIDE DOWN N SHIT. hot fog. sticks on heavenly smooth. __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15 Last edited by Fig; 03-14-2014 at 03:13 AM.

03-14-2014, 02:58 AM	#2
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	I will return the feed __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

03-15-2014, 12:36 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	tiger lily DIVINE. ^lol I'm the urinal allah ^lol This is how you express yourself. This is how you play Checkers. Now play chess. phaggot Keep doing you

03-15-2014, 01:00 PM	#4
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	You in a dysfunctional relationship nigga.