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![]() Synesthesia of fugue .. Water Lillie Each note is strung upon a symphony of peace As these peach lilies bleed under a lotus marquee The winds spread on the waters edge for their stage to travel I bathe, as they tread on honeycomb beds like dancing dimes unrattled I measure my dreams within a spinal column of sounds Parting through the olive green grass evoked by its bounds My tears are tamed through kisses of hope Now blanketed by the wishes I sow as it falls through the growth So subtle, gentle I sit - where mere angels sigh My eyes alight by the droplets made for minds like mine Fading to Calm; through the stalling springs Sprawled in a calling hymn that’s curled within An artist of garden’s suited for the world’s emporium Important, amongst a depth of pastels with Penrose italics A staircase of integrity defined by the faceless relics A glimpse, a glimmer upon a matrimony vine Time itself STOPS! A breath A Breath of suicide, To choose death you are alive So with each breath – I die .. The artist Garden Achieving utmost clarity throughout light cyan crystal’s Death, Bittersweet swirls rise and fall in an ultra violet whitewater stall of pistolet’s Upworld/Downwards - insideOUT I drown deep beneath the falling embers of my requiems doused In a karmasutra scented musk, that envelopes the fences of expressive trust Her slow but relentless experience in touch Provokes my natural obedience for lust This casual credence constructs a sparse over-dose n’ rush Before my eye’s, lies a Japanese bridge built on a field of rye Plant’s plant seeds of humming bird green.. for growth in time With relief in consent, she extends on top of me Soaking wet… head to toe… with fine finesse - honesty Upon my chest this girl…she wept with a moonlight grin An angelic soul consumed within a porcelain gown of moonlit skin I fly with thoughts of sure enough things As I bathe in wild strings of translucent emotions Afloat, the fires of smoke Below a bellow of hope Scaling down a virgin valley in an aurora of charcoal ribbons A foundation, a rainbow affect of rhythm A carnation of chaos raised up Her face flushed like scarlet oak aglow under her faded make-up Love to Lust to Love to Lust Innocence stolen by my very own clutch As I sit n’ gaze from lip to lip n’ sip the bitter sip of sorrow Once tomorrows wind shifts their splinters swift – I will know What seems changed – wont She’ll still remain the same tone A flat percussion A silent numb Fades in wavering across my breast As the blood orange willows births the moons ascent Honor so Hollow that for now I lie in remembrance Down a way worn path, by-standing with my stolen innocence .......................................... Aesthetic - When I inhaled ashes VERB - The Story of Eve: An Alternate History Sacrifice - "Next" - Newest Verse, written tonight.
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To be honest I didn't like water lillie, I found it kind of cheesey, nothing very thought provoking, and boring rhyme schemes.
On the other hand, the Artist Garden was very interesting, 10/10, great rhyme schemes, original interesting content.
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^respect..
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