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Mad fucking dangerous.
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![]() ![]() Season 3 The Basics | Read the full rules here. Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "Sons and Lovers" Good luck, @Soulstice and @Adonis.
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Tsk Tsk
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Nice opening bout, solid reason to actually show brotha Topicaldood5
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We'll make it a goodun
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Tsk Tsk
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Ext req. As precaution
Work late Friday night so will have verse in before that
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Ugh. I can drop tomorrow if you don't terribly mind. really though i have maybe 50% of my verse done
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Tsk Tsk
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well technically the extension expires at some point tonight.
I will have my verse sent to MOD and since I actually like you and look forward to this bout I will request/Approve your extension cuz ur the shit sir!
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Tsk Tsk
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![]() The Goddess of Purity, Whimsically draped, A feminine Lioness wrapped for mysteries sake, An enigma that will rise during her memory's wake, Bat an eye – Ocean Green, magically shaped Catching hearts as they dream, lying wide awake. Such a site to behold... ... Golden locks flow - Wind sniffles the scent, This cold Earth warmed by the pitching of tents, Not a fisher of men, cause, one man possesses her lovely intent, Her figure alone allures gawking events, The first of her kind, gorgeous and strong, Only pain in the rib is justly writing a song, Her Garden of Eden is lightning that's calm, Exciting palms climb her limbs sprightly with charm, Imagine being alone precisely half eternity, Then overnight the apple of your eye sprouts from obscurity... ….Ironically.... The foundation of love is the Eve of destruction ... Obey the hand that feeds and never shit where you sleep, In other words, if your spouse asks.... Then she receives, Even if creator pleads, “Keep away from the seed”, But there's tricksters about, slithering tongues, whisper aloud, Convincing deceit... Filling minds with doubt. The Son's loved – The father adored, But a lovers bond... Is what's always endured Adam Appleseed Yumm... Topic:"Sons and Lovers"
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