A Psychopaths Thoughts

[Allen Knight]

As I look in the mirror trying to convince myself im ridden w/ human emotion
Thoughts of body parts dismantled n ppl strangled Sickened w/ inhuman motions
The rollercoaster that's my mind, tingles my spine got me bugging rough
A paradise of skeletons hung from trees w/ flower tops of knees & rivers pumping blood
I can't hold back this vicious feeling wanna decapitate bitches kneeling its so serene
My heart beats fast sensation of bodys on broken glass w/ animals strapped in guillotines
Day dreams of pulling out organs my mind hates me.. high off acid, pcp and some coke
The feel is dull..Playing double dutch on a feild of skulls using intestines for jump rope
Adrenaline pumped in my brain can't front im insane before I go to sleep I count armless kids
A fantasy factory of morbid catastrophes a zip line made of human hair & a harness of skin
Head is loomin sicker wrestling w/ this eruge of wanting to hold a human liver
Thru Many fatalities I snap back to reality, a killer instinct staring at my soul in this mirror
why im emotionless & evil, wanting to torcher all these ppl in my head it haunt sections
But all that's left in this bones n flesh is an entity of some one that's really not present

[Hush]

Hate horror core rap


Your cool tho

Just didn't dig the subject matter here

Seen much better from u technically also
This ain't ur lane


Let's callabro

[Allen Knight]

Werd just trying somthing different wrote this in 20 min
Im Tryna get into openmic more
But yea im down for a collab pm me topic

[Lars]

I think the imagery is your best point, the jump rope with intestines was real vivid, plenty of gore to this but then I'm a horrorcore fan so I can appreciate it fully.

I think swag and flow joints would be better suited to your style because of you being a battler, it's easier to adapt to that format than it will be for you to go full topical or open mic orientated.

@Genocide would probably be good for you to write with, similar style and all, the two could compliment each other. You should collab for sure.

Keep that pen moving!

[Just Write]

Yea i gotta agree with lars, pretty vivid shit, especually the jump rope/intestines part.cool drop though, ill definitely peep ya'll collab

[Split]

this was wicked fucking smooth, everything rolled nicely. your schemes are mad good, you can definitely see the shortbar influence too. short but good

[Vulgar]

Yeah not really feeling the horrorcore style from you, honestly. It was off, IMO. The flow was good though.