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Old 04-09-2013, 10:06 PM   #1
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Default Genocide: The Thrill is Gone.

Look..
I'm Cletus Kassidy, distraction when I flip in the booth
With blood on my hands, splashin' like the symbiote suit
Spittin the truth, the microphone can't capture what the images do
Cynical mood, a guilty conscience makes me innocence proof
The subaru I just copped is at its peak performance
When I'm in the driver seat, I'm the machine, its gorgeous
Carefree, ignore it, it ain't important enough to come on the ride
Fuck up the vibe, tell the Voices in my head -shut the fuck up, nd drive
Clutch gets dumped on the dime, and then its back to the crib
Back to the fucking problem, where it actually lives
The devils advocate, twins, racing thoughts have returned
Life is real again, and offers fucking cause for concern
A flying saucer, a bird, like what the fucks really up
Needing my bills to stack higher than the sum of them does
Cause im'a empty magazines like the pages we're gone
Two automatic tech's, singing, simultaneous songs
The sign of change's evolved, weather I make it or not
Never take your best one, let your best take the shots
Before your nest eggs are rotten, while you still have a casue
Nowadays I come and go, cause the thrill has been lost
The fucking pill has dissolved, and I ain't high anymore
Its not a natural rush to me if the rhyming is forced
I feel it dying, the corpse, the rigormortis, decay
I still have an appetite, but its sort of at bay
This is important to say, guess its the shit on my chest
Spirit to write comes from pain, its residual, dead
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Old 04-09-2013, 11:03 PM   #2
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this was really dope man..the whole feel to it.. i had a gangster vibe in some parts and a more serious tone in others when i read it.. the last 1/4 talking about the forced rhyming on was my favorite part. also enjoyed the microphone line, empty magazine line and the pills dissolve ect. ect... yea man good stuff. thanks for the read
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Old 04-10-2013, 12:34 PM   #3
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Look..
I'm Cletus Kassidy, distraction when I flip in the booth
With blood on my hands, splashin' like the symbiote suit
Spittin the truth, the microphone can't capture what the images do
Cynical mood, a guilty conscience makes me innocence proof
The subaru I just copped is at its peak performance
When I'm in the driver seat, I'm the machine, its gorgeous
Carefree, ignore it, it ain't important enough to come on the ride
Fuck up the vibe, tell the Voices in my head -shut the fuck up, nd drive
^^Dope. The words just flowed right off the tongue effortlessly.
This is a damn good drop Geno, but you are all ready knew that didn't ya lol. But I feel that it kinda sorta started to fall off towards the end in that it didn't have the same impact as the lines I just quoted did. But maybe that's just me. But all in all a great drop Geno I just wish you'd get your ass back in the league lol. Keep droppin man and you should put the Adolf avy back up that was a badass look lol
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Old 04-11-2013, 02:23 AM   #4
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whatup geno. still keepin ur shit tight and nicely structured i see. proppers my friend. need to start hearin u on some real tracks.. u gotta style for it. well worded, pretty heart felt content. some pretty impressive flowing going on too, especially those first few bars with the "a" sound at the beggining... distraction, splashing, capture.. that opener was flames. Great open mic man. Look forward to more
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well look who's back. :)

Love the wordplay!

Very somber tone but beautiful and easy to relate to.

Rhyming mechanic's solid as usual.

Wording was the highlight for me.

A flying saucer, a bird, like what the fucks really up
Needing my bills to stack higher than the sum of them does
Cause im'a empty magazines like the pages we're gone
Two automatic tech's, singing, simultaneous songs
The sign of change's evolved, weather I make it or not
Never take your best one, let your best take the shots


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