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White Earl
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I'm Cletus Kassidy, distraction when I flip in the booth With blood on my hands, splashin' like the symbiote suit Spittin the truth, the microphone can't capture what the images do Cynical mood, a guilty conscience makes me innocence proof The subaru I just copped is at its peak performance When I'm in the driver seat, I'm the machine, its gorgeous Carefree, ignore it, it ain't important enough to come on the ride Fuck up the vibe, tell the Voices in my head -shut the fuck up, nd drive Clutch gets dumped on the dime, and then its back to the crib Back to the fucking problem, where it actually lives The devils advocate, twins, racing thoughts have returned Life is real again, and offers fucking cause for concern A flying saucer, a bird, like what the fucks really up Needing my bills to stack higher than the sum of them does Cause im'a empty magazines like the pages we're gone Two automatic tech's, singing, simultaneous songs The sign of change's evolved, weather I make it or not Never take your best one, let your best take the shots Before your nest eggs are rotten, while you still have a casue Nowadays I come and go, cause the thrill has been lost The fucking pill has dissolved, and I ain't high anymore Its not a natural rush to me if the rhyming is forced I feel it dying, the corpse, the rigormortis, decay I still have an appetite, but its sort of at bay This is important to say, guess its the shit on my chest Spirit to write comes from pain, its residual, dead
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this was really dope man..the whole feel to it.. i had a gangster vibe in some parts and a more serious tone in others when i read it.. the last 1/4 talking about the forced rhyming on was my favorite part. also enjoyed the microphone line, empty magazine line and the pills dissolve ect. ect... yea man good stuff. thanks for the read
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Arm the Homeless
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I'm Cletus Kassidy, distraction when I flip in the booth With blood on my hands, splashin' like the symbiote suit Spittin the truth, the microphone can't capture what the images do Cynical mood, a guilty conscience makes me innocence proof The subaru I just copped is at its peak performance When I'm in the driver seat, I'm the machine, its gorgeous Carefree, ignore it, it ain't important enough to come on the ride Fuck up the vibe, tell the Voices in my head -shut the fuck up, nd drive ^^Dope. The words just flowed right off the tongue effortlessly. This is a damn good drop Geno, but you are all ready knew that didn't ya lol. But I feel that it kinda sorta started to fall off towards the end in that it didn't have the same impact as the lines I just quoted did. But maybe that's just me. But all in all a great drop Geno I just wish you'd get your ass back in the league lol. Keep droppin man and you should put the Adolf avy back up that was a badass look lol |
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Mic Check
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whatup geno. still keepin ur shit tight and nicely structured i see. proppers my friend. need to start hearin u on some real tracks.. u gotta style for it. well worded, pretty heart felt content. some pretty impressive flowing going on too, especially those first few bars with the "a" sound at the beggining... distraction, splashing, capture.. that opener was flames. Great open mic man. Look forward to more
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well look who's back. :)
Love the wordplay! Very somber tone but beautiful and easy to relate to. Rhyming mechanic's solid as usual. Wording was the highlight for me. A flying saucer, a bird, like what the fucks really up Needing my bills to stack higher than the sum of them does Cause im'a empty magazines like the pages we're gone Two automatic tech's, singing, simultaneous songs The sign of change's evolved, weather I make it or not Never take your best one, let your best take the shots Wonderful.
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White Earl
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up muhahahahhaa
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