morning flex

Just Write · 02-11-2014, 10:44 AM

Fuckin with me, you'll get a couple knucks to the teeth,
Or a switchblade. I'll slit you six ways n' Rupture your spleen.
im unstoppable. the constable. flow stay constant. tha' cleanest,
You not hostile at all. Soft, like a box full of kleenex.
Shotties and cleavers. get shot then chopped into pieces.
Give me a crow bar cuz its so hard to get you bitches off of my penis
You can't possibly beat this whether in text or the physical.
Years beyond my time... but still collecting residuals

fresh · 02-12-2014, 02:58 PM

You wake up in the morning and flex for yourself in the mirror or what? Other then the sub-par rhyme scheme this was just crap. Thats about all there is to say about this piece.

Just Write · 02-12-2014, 03:01 PM

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Originally Posted by fresh

You wake up in the morning and flex for yourself in the mirror or what? Other then the sub-par rhyme scheme this was just crap. Thats about all there is to say about this piece.

Thanks for the free bump little guy

Frank · 02-12-2014, 03:03 PM

Breakfast of champions

dead man · 02-12-2014, 03:10 PM

Nice bro

Box full of tissue was probs my favorite

Aesthetic · 02-12-2014, 03:12 PM

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I bet you piss like a bitch

-Method Man

Just Write · 02-12-2014, 03:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Aesthetic

-Method Man

Only on the mornings where my dicks too hard to piss standing up

Thanks @dead man @Frank if theres any pieces u want me to feed pm me or drop the link

Frank · 02-12-2014, 03:39 PM

Anything on the second page

Props

Just Write · 02-13-2014, 01:03 PM

@CopyPat, you should like this

Clayray · 02-13-2014, 05:01 PM

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You can't possibly beat this whether in text or the physical.
Years beyond my time... but still collecting residuals

My favorite part.. I wish the piece was longer though. felt like this coulda been posted in the cypher section rather than OM. but either way it was ok. more like a battle verse to me. rhymes were standard. no multies that I could see..

Mike Wrecka · 02-13-2014, 05:05 PM

pretty cool little flex here. flow is always on point

02-11-2014, 10:44 AM	#1
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	morning flex Fuckin with me, you'll get a couple knucks to the teeth, Or a switchblade. I'll slit you six ways n' Rupture your spleen. im unstoppable. the constable. flow stay constant. tha' cleanest, You not hostile at all. Soft, like a box full of kleenex. Shotties and cleavers. get shot then chopped into pieces. Give me a crow bar cuz its so hard to get you bitches off of my penis You can't possibly beat this whether in text or the physical. Years beyond my time... but still collecting residuals __________________

02-12-2014, 03:03 PM	#4
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Breakfast of champions __________________ *VETWORK*

02-12-2014, 03:10 PM	#5
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Nice bro Box full of tissue was probs my favorite __________________ Zack Wicks for president

02-12-2014, 03:39 PM	#8
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Anything on the second page Props __________________ *VETWORK*

02-13-2014, 01:03 PM	#9
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	@CopyPat, you should like this __________________

02-12-2014, 02:58 PM	#2
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	You wake up in the morning and flex for yourself in the mirror or what? Other then the sub-par rhyme scheme this was just crap. Thats about all there is to say about this piece.

02-13-2014, 05:05 PM	#11
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	pretty cool little flex here. flow is always on point __________________ A.bove T.he R.est