AOWL Week 6: Mac (1-2) VS. nO goOd! (0-1) [MAC WINS BY NO SHOW.]

Frank · 03-20-2013, 12:44 AM

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum.

Verses are due SATURDAY 3/23 at 11:59 PST.

Extensions are due SUNDAY 3/24 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!!

You MUST check in.

You must vote on at least 4 other battles. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.

TOPIC: "The Warlord" - (selected by Adonis)

Good luck to both participants. @Mac @nO gOoD!

Dove Dozer · 03-20-2013, 08:00 AM

Salutes.

Good luck

Mac · 03-20-2013, 02:05 PM

yo

King Ra. · 03-20-2013, 09:30 PM

@Mac you owe 4 votes extra this week. Any missing votes this week will count as a deduction towards the final tally of this match.

nO gOod! is clear.

Dove Dozer · 03-21-2013, 10:25 AM

Requesting an extenstion. My verse will go here.

Mac · 03-21-2013, 02:09 PM

i spent my infancy in an orphanage, alone
as families ignored me i had to live on my own
i built my own personality based on accumulated anger
along the years i wanted to find the answer
who's my mother and why she left me
what's the man or her hopes of what she wants me to be
my confidence wasn't there, i fell into depression
awkdark expressions, bad first impressions
started anger management sessions as i grew up
they forced me to imagine myself in a country club
with chicks, peacefully laying on the beach
they wanted to ruin me with their stupid speechs
change my personality, turn myself in another person
i decided to stop, seek for another point of views and versions
i wanted revenge, i wanted my mother to pay for what she did
for dropping me in a shithole, an orphanage when just a kid
withdrawed my life savings, went to Siberia and bought guns
planning to re sell them i've already sold tons
and no, not seeking for blood i just wanted to find my mother
but i wouldn't kill her, slowly my guns would find and get her away

really sorry for doing such shit verse.

Split · 03-25-2013, 03:07 AM

Mac wins by no show

03-20-2013, 12:44 AM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	AOWL Week 6: Mac (1-2) VS. nO goOd! (0-1) [MAC WINS BY NO SHOW.] 16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum. Verses are due SATURDAY 3/23 at 11:59 PST. Extensions are due SUNDAY 3/24 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!! You MUST check in. You must vote on at least 4 other battles. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week. If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league. TOPIC: "The Warlord" - (selected by Adonis) Good luck to both participants. @Mac @nO gOoD! __________________ *VETWORK*

03-21-2013, 10:25 AM	#5
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Requesting an extenstion. My verse will go here. __________________

03-25-2013, 03:07 AM	#7
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Mac wins by no show __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

03-20-2013, 08:00 AM	#2
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Salutes. Good luck

03-20-2013, 02:05 PM	#3
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	yo

03-20-2013, 09:30 PM	#4
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	@Mac you owe 4 votes extra this week. Any missing votes this week will count as a deduction towards the final tally of this match. nO gOod! is clear.

03-21-2013, 02:09 PM	#6
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	i spent my infancy in an orphanage, alone as families ignored me i had to live on my own i built my own personality based on accumulated anger along the years i wanted to find the answer who's my mother and why she left me what's the man or her hopes of what she wants me to be my confidence wasn't there, i fell into depression awkdark expressions, bad first impressions started anger management sessions as i grew up they forced me to imagine myself in a country club with chicks, peacefully laying on the beach they wanted to ruin me with their stupid speechs change my personality, turn myself in another person i decided to stop, seek for another point of views and versions i wanted revenge, i wanted my mother to pay for what she did for dropping me in a shithole, an orphanage when just a kid withdrawed my life savings, went to Siberia and bought guns planning to re sell them i've already sold tons and no, not seeking for blood i just wanted to find my mother but i wouldn't kill her, slowly my guns would find and get her away really sorry for doing such shit verse.