A Better Pawn. Ft: Exis and Geno

Geno · 02-04-2014, 12:59 PM

exis..

Yo,
The locks are golden
with a couple streaks of red
double d's her breasts
her hair is flicked from off her shoulders
then looks at me and says
"Are you in need of sex?
I see you checkin' my cleavage boo
I'm not obsessed like your penis do
how's about we just speak instead?"
with that I paused for a minute...
tried to think of more than her image,
less of soarin' up in it
and then replied with this
"Your my kind of chick,
the type I've wished for
appearance be heavenly but you've a devilish charm
I see you wear your heart on your sleeve
yet only want one man on your arm.

geno..
Her smile could melt glaciers, a child that hell's favored
Waist is razor sharp, just as exotic as health made her
Behaviors cute, lose my mind behind her in those favorite boots
The way she moves, attraction is her hobby and she crazy smooth
Id maybe do some dumb shit to cop the dime, like homocide
Familiar with those, cause the last dude she broke with probably died
Sly, but she play the innocent act and never finishes last
Niggas would die to be with her, just to live in that ass
But business is business, and she the definition of bitches is bad
Plays games with your head, and there's no forgiveness for that
In fact, the phrase hard to get isn't very far from fetched
Its like you fucked up and couldn't get it off your chest
But she don't beat around the bush when she talks direct
Its off to bed, alone, cause she with a better pawn instead
The cats paws been swept, scars been stretched across you dog
Your healing from wounds, aren't your fucking fault at all

Geno · 02-05-2014, 05:04 PM

damn, sup?

i know the kid is text rusty cause i been writing audio friendly shit lately -but damn at no love for either of us

CopyPat · 02-05-2014, 05:20 PM

don't worry you always get love from me!

again cool to see something different, lots of interesting shit floating around the OM right now. sick.

Ex this was so different from u. I'm really impressed man. shows what kindof talent u have when u put ur mind to something. at first glance your verse would "look" wack cause of the short bar style. but reading it was crazy smooth, honestly wish it was longer dude. great amount of scheming etc packed in that little ass verse.
Geno i was expecting fire and was let down slightly. but only slightly. the first few bars came out BLAZING, i then found it slowed down eventually till the end with the cat and dog bullshit which i thought was weak to be honest. besides the last bar though the verse as a whole was really really good, your command of everything is vet. you know how to write songs man, its sick. i love ur audio style approach. almost all of my stuff is meant for beats too so i always appreciate when u can make something dope that also fits into the confines of a beat.

as a whole it was fresh collab, u 2 meshed well and didn't get off topic so yeah good shit

Exis · 02-05-2014, 10:46 PM

Lol @ Geno and no love, you only posted it like a minute back foolio...thanks for the feed Copy.

Exis · 02-11-2014, 04:12 PM

Upsy daisy.

Vulgar · 02-21-2014, 12:22 PM

The title is ehh. Pretty chill verses from both.

tried to think of more than her image,
less of soarin' up in it
^This was a cool bar, and true.

I see you wear your heart on your sleeve
yet only want one man on your arm.
^Nice phrase.

Behaviors cute, lose my mind behind her in those favorite boots
The way she moves, attraction is her hobby and she crazy smooth
^"Attraction is her hobby" is a dope concept.

Sly, but she play the innocent act and never finishes last
Niggas would die to be with her, just to live in that ass
^lol

Cool work fellas. @Exis @Genocide

02-04-2014, 12:59 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	A Better Pawn. Ft: Exis and Geno exis.. Yo, The locks are golden with a couple streaks of red double d's her breasts her hair is flicked from off her shoulders then looks at me and says "Are you in need of sex? I see you checkin' my cleavage boo I'm not obsessed like your penis do how's about we just speak instead?" with that I paused for a minute... tried to think of more than her image, less of soarin' up in it and then replied with this "Your my kind of chick, the type I've wished for appearance be heavenly but you've a devilish charm I see you wear your heart on your sleeve yet only want one man on your arm. geno.. Her smile could melt glaciers, a child that hell's favored Waist is razor sharp, just as exotic as health made her Behaviors cute, lose my mind behind her in those favorite boots The way she moves, attraction is her hobby and she crazy smooth Id maybe do some dumb shit to cop the dime, like homocide Familiar with those, cause the last dude she broke with probably died Sly, but she play the innocent act and never finishes last Niggas would die to be with her, just to live in that ass But business is business, and she the definition of bitches is bad Plays games with your head, and there's no forgiveness for that In fact, the phrase hard to get isn't very far from fetched Its like you fucked up and couldn't get it off your chest But she don't beat around the bush when she talks direct Its off to bed, alone, cause she with a better pawn instead The cats paws been swept, scars been stretched across you dog Your healing from wounds, aren't your fucking fault at all __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-05-2014, 05:04 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	damn, sup? i know the kid is text rusty cause i been writing audio friendly shit lately -but damn at no love for either of us __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-05-2014, 05:20 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	don't worry you always get love from me! again cool to see something different, lots of interesting shit floating around the OM right now. sick. Ex this was so different from u. I'm really impressed man. shows what kindof talent u have when u put ur mind to something. at first glance your verse would "look" wack cause of the short bar style. but reading it was crazy smooth, honestly wish it was longer dude. great amount of scheming etc packed in that little ass verse. Geno i was expecting fire and was let down slightly. but only slightly. the first few bars came out BLAZING, i then found it slowed down eventually till the end with the cat and dog bullshit which i thought was weak to be honest. besides the last bar though the verse as a whole was really really good, your command of everything is vet. you know how to write songs man, its sick. i love ur audio style approach. almost all of my stuff is meant for beats too so i always appreciate when u can make something dope that also fits into the confines of a beat. as a whole it was fresh collab, u 2 meshed well and didn't get off topic so yeah good shit __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

02-05-2014, 10:46 PM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lol @ Geno and no love, you only posted it like a minute back foolio...thanks for the feed Copy.

02-11-2014, 04:12 PM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Upsy daisy.

02-21-2014, 12:22 PM	#6
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	The title is ehh. Pretty chill verses from both. tried to think of more than her image, less of soarin' up in it ^This was a cool bar, and true. I see you wear your heart on your sleeve yet only want one man on your arm. ^Nice phrase. Behaviors cute, lose my mind behind her in those favorite boots The way she moves, attraction is her hobby and she crazy smooth ^"Attraction is her hobby" is a dope concept. Sly, but she play the innocent act and never finishes last Niggas would die to be with her, just to live in that ass ^lol Cool work fellas. @Exis @Genocide